24小时热门版块排行榜    

查看: 965  |  回复: 4
当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖,点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖

Lopemann

荣誉版主 (职业作家)

聽真那自由在奏鳴

[交流] 【activity】Paraphrase practice three

Today our sentences are:
This work involves experts and many good submission over the past years, but in the end it is not applied.
I wish you good luck, because there are many challenges being in high office.

You can choose one of them or all of them to paraphrase. Up to you.

All the paraphrase practice will be put in the folder "English Writing"
Feel free to subscribe it.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

I will give you guys a sentence or sentences on a regular basis.
Basically these sentences have some deficits and what I expect you guys to do is to eliminate deficits as you can.
You can add more details, you can do some replacements, and you can do anything you want.

As long as you post your version here, I will give you some BBs.
For good translations, I will highlight them. And of course I will post my own version here.


My translation:

Years of work by an expert panel, drawing on thousands of submissions, has come to nothing.
I wish you all the best for the rigors of high office that inevitable lie ahead.


[ Last edited by Lopemann on 2014-2-2 at 06:19 ]
回复此楼
现实世界的理想主义卧底 Gypsy in memory
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

zixinjuan

金虫 (正式写手)

★ ★ ★
Lopemann: 金币+3, Your paraphrase is good! But you seem to have misunderstood it...basically the idea is the sentence is that hard work for years is wasted. 2014-01-03 11:55:26
We have got used to ask experts for advices before we have to deal with something,but finally we solved it in our own way.Because things are always changing,different analyses is conbined with different conditions.

[ 发自手机版 http://muchong.com/3g ]
A little bit more.
3楼2014-01-03 10:56:44
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
查看全部 5 个回答

talkthisover

木虫 (著名写手)

中二病轻度患者

★ ★ ★ ★
Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:45:35
Lopemann: 金币+4, Looks pretty great! Thanks mate! 2014-01-04 08:45:56
YOURS: This work involves(or involved?) experts and many good submission over the past years, but in the end it is not applied.
I wish you good luck, because there are many challenges being in high office.
my version:
A piece of work that was carried out by various professionals and under great comformity failed to come into application at last.
Luck attached to yourself for being in a high postion, you are always surrounded by myriad challenges.
在自己没有翅膀的肩上,背负了真实和梦想。
4楼2014-01-03 22:56:14
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

Lopemann

荣誉版主 (职业作家)

聽真那自由在奏鳴

Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2014-01-04 08:53:56
Here is the version I provide. Hope it helps.

Years of work by an expert panel, drawing on thousands of submissions, has come to nothing.
I wish you all the best for the rigors of high office that inevitable lie ahead.

@talkthisover
@20090472
@zixinjuan
@00waterh
现实世界的理想主义卧底 Gypsy in memory
5楼2014-01-04 08:53:45
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
普通表情 高级回复 (可上传附件)
最具人气热帖推荐 [查看全部] 作者 回/看 最后发表
[基金申请] 欢迎发来filecode的Mz6后的代码验证其规律 +24 医学老男孩 2026-08-13 50/2500 2026-08-15 06:38 by 学员8dgXkO
[公派出国] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8.O55.1.O.54,科目全,可十急 +3 7lpolszZVXgi 2026-08-14 5/250 2026-08-15 04:41 by 4wMiSEwB6436
[基金申请] 小木虫上这么多卖论文的,真有人买论文么?感觉没必要啊 +11 Tide man 2026-08-10 12/600 2026-08-15 02:12 by home3163
[考研] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8.O55.1.O.54,科目全,可十急 +3 HFw0lei2R37i 2026-08-14 7/350 2026-08-15 00:40 by 4wMiSEwB6436
[论文投稿] 售SCI一区文章,我:8O5.5.1.O5.4,科目全,可伽急 +3 HFw0lei2R37i 2026-08-14 5/250 2026-08-15 00:16 by 4wMiSEwB6436
[考研] 售SCI一区T0P文章,我:8.O.55.1.O.54,科目齐全,可+急 +4 HFw0lei2R37i 2026-08-14 8/400 2026-08-15 00:16 by 4wMiSEwB6436
[基金申请] 是这周出结果还是下周出结果? +4 yuleib84 2026-08-11 4/200 2026-08-14 23:05 by lfy8008
[基金申请] 哪位老哥知道今年的国自然具体哪一天放榜? +5 Ldrop2023 2026-08-13 5/250 2026-08-14 18:48 by ssxclkj
[基金申请] filecode +15 documentary 2026-08-10 17/850 2026-08-14 10:08 by kissu88
[基金申请] FileCode能看出啥? +10 要乐观耀哥 2026-08-10 32/1600 2026-08-14 09:37 by 要乐观耀哥
[基金申请] 我的国基提前知道中了,可是同事的操作让我实在接受不了,怎么会有这样的人 +10 家与远方 2026-08-10 15/750 2026-08-14 02:08 by 绵羊哥哥
[基金申请] 不应该看fileCode +7 且听虎啸 2026-08-12 9/450 2026-08-13 14:27 by flydreamws
[基金申请] Filecode 又变了,巨变 +3 WH3796 2026-08-12 4/200 2026-08-13 14:13 by 小木虫6752397
[基金申请] 分享一下我之前已中青C的计划书的filecode +4 布布和一二 2026-08-11 5/250 2026-08-13 12:56 by cratir
[基金申请] 帮忙看看fileCode +7 wwncly 2026-08-10 13/650 2026-08-11 19:36 by 冰心玉壶晴
[基金申请] 为什么网上很多人说本周 12号出结果 +6 瞬息宇宙 2026-08-10 7/350 2026-08-11 19:25 by Tide man
[基金申请] 确定了,国自然21号放榜 +6 布布和一二 2026-08-10 7/350 2026-08-10 19:15 by 2000zf36392
[基金申请] 2026国自然放榜时间 +9 布布和一二 2026-08-08 9/450 2026-08-10 11:22 by xxxx2020
[基金申请] fileCode有新解读? +10 Tide man 2026-08-08 18/900 2026-08-09 12:55 by 仁砚薪传
[基金申请] 关于filecode,很负责任的告诉大家 +6 爱看书的可乐 2026-08-08 7/350 2026-08-08 22:13 by a_niu
信息提示
请填处理意见