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It is well known that most of the defluoridation techniques involve the use of aluminum compounds because of the similarities of the charges of the fluoride ions with that of hydroxyl ions and the ease of replacement of the fluoride ions with that of hydroxyl ions to form fluoride aluminum hydroxide complex.看一篇文献好长的一句话,越看越别扭,能不能帮我用两句话表达相同意思。先谢谢了
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cgjlove: 金币+10, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢 2013-12-29 22:13:23
It is well known that most of the defluoridation techniques involve the use of aluminum compounds . Because of the similarities of the charges of the fluoride ions with that of hydroxyl ions , the replacement of the fluoride ions with that of hydroxyl ions to form fluoride aluminum hydroxide complex is easy.
原句没啥别扭的啊,如果写作,都是要加分的句子。虽然拆成两句,但除非文章需要,否则一般还是原文写的好些!

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2楼: Originally posted by RXMCDM at 2013-12-29 22:04:39
It is well known that most of the defluoridation techniques involve the use of aluminum compounds . Because of the similarities of the charges of the fluoride ions with that of hydroxyl ions , the re ...

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