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[交流] Writing Activity 3, December 15th to December 18th (One article available)

Guys I know English writing has become more and more an issue.

Having seen this, I want to run a series of writing activities for the following month.

Feel free to participate.

Just keep in mind.
No matter how much you read, how much you listen, if you never ever actually write something,
there is no way for you to write a good article in examination condition.

If you do not want to write anything but have the proofreading ability, you are also more than welcomed to pick up others' mistakes

All the writing activities will be put in a folder I made.
You can subscribe it if you want.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

After you finish writing this topic, please post your article here.
If I've got enough time, I can do some proofreading for you but it's not guaranteed.
I will highlight the articles I think highly of.  


Activity three:
Technological progress in the past century has its negative effect, despite its remarkable contribution. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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6楼: Originally posted by polo_he at 2014-01-04 22:40:30
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Lopemann: 金币+2, Feel free to participate! 2013-12-16 16:59:02
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Lopemann: 金币+6, Thanks for sharing! 2013-12-17 07:57:10
there are both effects in positive and negative in any technological progress . in modern sociaty,people would not servival if there is not modern technology,on the other hand,advanced technology bring or cause us some problem,for example, computer and internet really bring us lots of benefits. not computer and internet, no every day life.but they bring much more problem to the moderm sociaty. like health problem,internet crimation,and so on.

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Lopemann: 回帖置顶 2013-12-17 08:16:48
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3楼: Originally posted by sjsjan at 2013-12-17 07:48:41
there are both effects in positive and negative in any technological progress . in modern sociaty,people would not servival if there is not modern technology,on the other hand,advanced technology bri ...

Long screen time everyday put many in a position where there is a tendency for chronic disease, and thus these people are actually in great need of digital detox.

Health effects aside, we are not working for machine and money, aren't we?
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