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[交流] Writing Activity 1, December 4th to December 6th (Three articles available)

Guys I know English writing has become more and more an issue.

Having seen this, I want to run a series of writing activities for the following month.

Feel free to participate.

Just keep in mind.
No matter how much you read, how much you listen, if you never ever actually write something,
there is no way for you to write a good article in examination condition.

If you do not want to write anything but have the proofreading ability, you are also more than welcomed to pick up others' mistakes

All the writing activities will be put in a folder I made.
You can subscribe it if you want.
http://muchong.com/bbs/taotie.php?action=view&ttid=46562

After you finish writing this topic, please post your article here.
If I've got enough time, I can do some proofreading for you but it's not guaranteed.
I will highlight the articles I think highly of.

Activity one:
Some people think the media should not report details of crimes to the public.to what extent do you agree or disagree?

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00waterh: 金币+16, ESEPI+1, To sum up. it is safe to say reporting crimes activities aimed at letting us learn how to protect ourselves will be benefitial to us.~thank you 2013-12-12 09:39:02

Suddenly I realised the ablity to my writing is  a pupil level.
Really hope Lope can revise something, and give me some advice to me.
the below is my wirting.

With the rise of technology, cellphones and computers are prevailing among youngsters. As a result, tons of information reported by medium can easily convery to people. They will inevitably exposure some negative news in detail by exclusive report. However, the detailed crimes procedure reported can bring about some bad effect such as increaing the risk of crimes.  Therefore, many educators advise that medium should not report details of crimes to the public, Personally, I basically agree.

First of all,  reporting details of crimes can damage criminals’ image. As we all know everyone has the right of portraits even s/he is in prison. When medium always report detailed crime,  criminals has to accept their interview, in this case, you can imagine that these criminals will feel ashamed for what they did.  By doing this, they are difficult to change for the better after out of prison. Therefore, crimals’ interest will be damaged.

Besides that, it will affect adversely young people. For one thing, people who have heard of deatiled crimes are easy to become aggressive. A recent survey found, after polling hundreds of young people in the street, ranging from 15 years old to 35 years old, most respondents claimed that they were more likely to become annoyed and out of control after conveyed some news on detailed crimes.

For another thing, young people, because of their instinctive abilities to simulate, will imitate bad manners from criminals reported by TV.  For example,  if  CCTV news reported murderers how to kill people in detail, some young people will simulate the same thing in real world when confronting the similar case.  Therefore, no one can deny the fact that reporting detailed crimes will lead to some negative effect in society.

However, exceptions do exist. Sometimes, reporting detailed crimes can protect ourselves from hazardous circumstances. For instance, one will realise how to avoid being stolen by thieves on the bus after hearing about the crime activity. One in the mid-night will never walk alone in the dark corner after knowing a chance to happen to robbers will increase at night.

To sum up. it is safe to say reporting crimes activities aimed at letting us learn how to protect ourselves will be benefitial to us.