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Ryan2011

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[求助] 第一封陶瓷信·1min前发出去了,好紧张好紧张


我的第一封信刚刚发出去了,好紧张好紧张,其实我已经落后很多了,才开始陶瓷,这封信和CV我准备了很久,一直在修改。。终于今天发出去了。。。
各位路过的就看看,关于内容和长度等等方面,给点建议啊~~~~尽管拍砖啊~~~


Dear Professor PW,

It is of great honor for me to contact you for the application of a PhD position in your prestigious group.

I am JN Y, a master student majored in xxxxxxxxxxxx at xx University (expected July 2014), which is ranked around xxxth in China.

I am very interested in working with you (through China Scholarship Council funding if possible), so I am writing this email to you.

The research topics your group is deal with are indeed exciting and meaningful, and what especially interests me is the research done on the implementation of xxxxxxx on xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx as shown in your recent publications. This matches some of my experiences of xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx elucidated in the short description below.

My research experiences mainly revolved around xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx,  ranging from xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx to xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx etc.

Besides, I have some output for my research. I have 3 publications in the international journals with my major contribution, including xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (published), xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (just accepted),xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx (published). And I have also coauthored 2 other articles (xxxxxxxxxxxxx and xxxxxxxxxxx for my facilitation role in the research.

Although there does exist certain discrepancy of my experiences and your research topics, I think my diverse researching background and enduring self-motivation renders me the capability of generating good researching results in your group with your supervision.

Enclosed are my curriculum vitae with other important information covered.
And please do not hesitate to contact me if further information is needed.  

Thank you very much for your considerate attention to my email.
I am very keen to get your kind reply and get the chance of working in your group.


My Best Regards,
JN Y
School ofxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx
xxxxxxxxxxxxxx University, China
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52楼: Originally posted by witnessor at 2013-11-24 01:57:06
是啊,这就一件烦心的事。...


希望苦尽甘来~
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Ryan2011: 金币+1, 有帮助, 谢谢交流~ 2013-11-18 19:41:32
B4-449: 金币+5 2013-11-19 04:06:51
总体上挺好的,句子都比较通顺。两个小问题:
1、 ... your group is deal with ... 应该是dealing with.
2、 开头用honor感觉有点太客气了,呵呵, 要是我可能会说pleasant之类的。不过没啥大事,礼多人不怪。
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2楼: Originally posted by hank010 at 2013-11-18 19:24:59
总体上挺好的,句子都比较通顺。两个小问题:
1、 ... your group is deal with ... 应该是dealing with.
2、 开头用honor感觉有点太客气了,呵呵, 要是我可能会说pleasant之类的。不过没啥大事,礼多人不怪。

额额,那个deal是我不小心打错了。。。。。悔死了,早知道应该发一封到自己另一个邮箱看看的
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B4-449: 金币+5 2013-11-19 04:06:37
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3楼: Originally posted by Ryan2011 at 2013-11-18 19:40:03
额额,那个deal是我不小心打错了。。。。。悔死了,早知道应该发一封到自己另一个邮箱看看的...

刚开始都是这样的,很紧张,很在意邮件有没有瑕疵,以后就习惯了。我刚开始的几封信也试过给自己发,后来发多了就麻木了。另外提醒下你注意自己的发件人名称,别是中文的。
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