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Reviewers' comments: Reviewer #1: The paper has been improved and may be published after the following further corrections: Page 2, 2.2 Apparatus and procedure: The second line has to read: "....densitometer with estimated reproducibility of ± 1×10-5 g cm-3." (The author still does not understand the difference between reproducibility and accuracy). - Page 3, end of line 3 from above must be changed to: "...., in density approximately ± 1× 10-4 g cm-3, and in volume ± 1×10-3 cm3 mol-1." (The present values given in the ms. are only guesses and not compatible with accuracies in temperature of 10 m K!). - Page 3, 3.Results and discussion, last paragraph, first sentence should end:"....VmE is positive over the whole composition range and increases with the temperature." - Then the rest of this last paragraph has to be replaced by:" All maxima occur at x1~0.5, and are larger for the mixtures with 1,3,5-trimethylbenzene than with 1,2,4-trimethylbenzene. Since the attractive interactions by physical forces between the lactone and the trimethylbenzenes will be very similar, apparently the slightly bulkier molecular shape of 1,3,5-trimethylbenzene also causes slightly higher maxima of VmE in its mixtures." - In Table 1, 2, and 3 only four significant digits after the decimal point can be given for the densities (!). Change all. - In table 4 for all coefficients Ai and also for |
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skyang(金币+5,VIP+0):非常感谢！呵呵，尽管不太专业，呵呵，最后应该是过拟合的意思！
skyang(金币+5,VIP+0):非常感谢！呵呵，尽管不太专业，呵呵，最后应该是过拟合的意思！
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审稿人1：此文章需经过如下修改后才可发表 第二页 仪器与步骤（2.2 Apparatus and procedure）第二行densitometer with estimated reproducibility of ± 1×10-5 g cm-3."（作者仍然不清楚重现性与正确性的区别） 第三页第三行最后需改为 in density approximately ± 1× 10-4 g cm-3, and in volume ± 1×10-3 cm3 mol-1."目前的单位ms（毫秒）与温度mK之间的精确度不相匹配 最后一段其余部分应改为:" All maxima occur at x1~0.5, and are larger for the mixtures with 1,3,5-trimethylbenzene than with 1,2,4-trimethylbenzene. Since the attractive interactions by physical forces between the lactone and the trimethylbenzenes will be very similar, apparently the slightly bulkier molecular shape of 1,3,5-trimethylbenzene also causes slightly higher maxima of VmE in its mixtures." 表1，2，3中密度值应到小数点后4位 表4中 系数Ai和 图1，2中的曲线拟合的有些偏右；A3有些偏大：如果 |
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