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06113021zjh

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[求助] 大家帮忙看看这个句子有没有错

Conclusion:The data suggest that supplementation of vitamin D is effective in preventing overall mortality as observed in a long-term treatment duration. The effect was not significant when the treatment duration is shorter than 3 years.

请大家帮忙看看,上面这个句子有语法问题吗,尤其是时态。这是请一个海归帮忙修改后的,但我总觉得像suggest, is, was 时态不一致,请大家帮忙修改,先谢谢了。
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06113021zjh: 金币+1, 翻译EPI+1, 有帮助 2013-09-30 16:29:18
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Conclusion:The data suggest that supplementation of vitamin D is effective in preventing overall mortality in a long-term treatment (how long?), whereas it is not significantly effective in a treatment shorter than 3 years.
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2楼: Originally posted by xux730 at 2013-09-30 12:05:23
Conclusion:The data suggest that supplementation of vitamin D is effective in preventing overall mortality in a long-term treatment (how long?), whereas it is not significantly effective in a treatm ...

谢谢,这个只是其中的一句话,我只是想知道语法哪里改改下
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