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无名小冰冰

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[求助] 审稿人让我check这句话的语法,请大侠帮我看看错在哪里?

我是找专业的润色公司修改过的,之前most of them being less than 8%是most of them being are than 8%。润色后are改称了being,现在审稿人要我check这句话的语法。Also the percentage errors obtained for angular distortion and transverse shrinkage is relatively low, most of them being less than 8%. 还有这个percentage errors 后面跟的是is,这里是否也有错误??
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可以改为
Although the percentage errors obtained for angular distortion and transverse shrinkage are relatively low, most of them are less than 8%.
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无名小冰冰: 金币+5, 翻译EPI+1, 有帮助, 这里的percentage errors能否改称percentage error,后面还用is,most of which 挺少见的。 2013-08-18 09:26:04
most of them being less than 8%语法上面没有错误,建议楼主用定语从句。
Also the percentage errors of angular distortion and transverse shrinkage are relatively low, most of which are less than 8%.
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