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[交流] 期刊论文中分析方法研究英文摘要常见错误解析

容易犯的错误

中文期刊一般将英文摘要附后，但国外的CA索引的一般是英文的摘要，所以英文的摘呀也很重要。需要引起大家的注意。

1  中英文标题不一致
2  中英文的关键词不一致
3 不要将句子写的太长
4 善用倒装句
5 注意时态一致。一般用的过去式。
6 用好，respectiverly.
7 用意译，不用直译
8 中文内容和英文内容要一致。
三个实例

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气相色谱- 质谱法测定酒样中多种有机锡化合物-
(原文）
摘要: 对白酒中的有机锡化合物运用NaBEt4 进行衍生, 并采用液液萃取和气相色谱- 质谱法( GC-MS) 对5 种衍生物进行分析, 建立了5 种有机锡同时分析的新方法。选用选择离子扫描模式进行定性和定量分析, 实验对影响反应的重要参数进行了优化。在优化条件下, 5 种有机锡化合物在0. 01~ 4. 0 ug mL- 1 的线性范围内得获得了较好的线性, 检测限, 相关系数为0. 992 3~ 0. 999 9, 检测限为0. 4~ 5. 0 ug mL- 1 。在0. 05、0 . 50 和4. 0 ug mL- 1  3 个添加水平获得了较好的回收率, 其相对标准偏差低于13. 4% 。该方法简便、快速、容易操作, 初步运用于检测酒样中的有机锡化合物, 取得较满意的结果。
关键词: 有机锡; 衍生化; 液液萃取; 气相色谱- 质谱法; 酒样

气相色谱- 质谱法测定酒样中多种有机锡化合物

修改：
Determination of variety of organotin compounds in food by gas chromatography-mass spectrometry
（variety 改成 various ；把food改成或spirits, liquor
英文标题和中文不一致。  中文是酒样，英文是食品。

原文：Abstract: The or gano tins in spirit w er e derivat ized w ith NaBEt 4 and five derivativ es w ere ex t racted by liquid-liquid ex t ract ion technique and analyzed by g as chromato graphy-mass spect romet ric ( GC-MS) analy sis.A new metho d to simultaneously study the five derivat iv es w as proposed. T he qualitat ive and quant itat iveanalysis of org anot ins w as carried o ut by GC-MS in SIM mode. The sig nif icant factors in the exper iment w ere opt imized. T he experiment par ameters concerned GC separat ion pr ogr am, sodium tet raethy lbor ate
concent rat ion, type and v olume of ex tr act io n solvent , ex t ract ion time, pH and salt ing out ef fect w ere opt-i mized. U nder the opt imized condit ions, the considerable lineart ies and recov eries of the org anot ins w ere obtained.
T he result s show ed the go od linearity w hen the analyt ical co ncent ratio n w as in the range o f 0. 01-4. 0 ug  mL- 1 , the linear ity corr elat ion coeff icient s w ere betw een 0. 992 3 and 0. 999 9, w ith the LOD in the r ange o f 0. 4-5. 0 ug L- 1 . T he average recoveries for o rganot ins at three dif ferent addit ion levels w ere
betw een 68. 4% and 121. 0%, relat ive standar d deviat ions in the rang e of 5. 0%-13. 4%、4. 3%-10. 6% and 4. 3%-8. 9% respect iv ely . The metho d is proposed in this paper simple, rapid, and easy to implement for the determinat ion of or gano tins in spirit.
Key words: organot ins; derivat izat io n; GC-MS; w ines:

修改：
关键词：中文是酒，英文是wines, 一般是指葡萄酒。改成spirits or liquor(一般是指烈性酒)
重要参数：significant factors，可以改成 key parameters

The significant factors in the experiment were optimized. The experiment parameters concerned GC separation progr am, sodium tet raethy lbor ateconcent rat ion, type and v olume of ex tr act io n solvent , ex t ract ion time, pH and salt ing out ef fect w ere opt-imized.

和中文摘要不一致。可以缩写为：The main experimental parameters, such as, GC separation progr am, sodium tetraethylborate concentration, types and volumes of extraction solvent , ext ract ion time, pH and salinity were optimized.
The metho d is proposed in this paper simple, rapid, and easy to implement for the
determinat ion of or gano tins in spirit.改成

The method proposed in this paper is simple, rapid, and easy to implement.

中文写的是：。在0. 05、0 . 50 和4. 0 ug mL-1 个添加水平获得了较好的回收率, 其相对标准偏差低于13. 4%
可以改成
The average recoveries for organotins at three different spiked concentrations, 0. 05、0 . 50 和4. 0 ug mL-1,were between 68.4%-121.0%, the relative standard deviations were all below 13.4%.

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高效液相色谱法测定化妆品中的7 种色素
摘要: 建立了用高效液相色谱-二极管阵列检测法( HPLC-DAD) 同时检测化
妆品中7 种着色剂( 胭脂红Ponceau) 、萘酚黄( Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate) 、日落
黄( Food Yellow 3) 、酸性红33( Acid Red 33) 、诱惑红( Allura Red AC) 、酸性红13
( Acid Red 13) 、酸性橙( Orange II) ) 的检测方法。不同种类的化妆品采用不同
的样品前处理方法提取后，用C18 色谱柱分离，以甲醇-乙酸胺为流动相进行梯
度洗脱，检测波长为240nm，14 min 内可对7 种目标物同时进行检测，且各化合
物都达到基线分离。经测定，该方法的平均回收率为90. 5% ～ 100. 6%，相对标
准偏差为3. 2% ～ 6. 7%，方法检出限萘酚黄为5 mg /L，其余为3 mg /L。方法
简单、快速，能有效地提取、分离和测定化妆品中7 种着色剂。方法可用于实际
化妆品的检测。
关键词: 高效液相色谱; 色素; 化妆品

原文
Abstract: Ananalytical method based on high performance liquid chromatography with diode array detector ( HPLC-DAD) has been established for the simultaneous determination of 7colorants ( Ponceau，Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate，Food Yellow 3，Acid Red 33，Allura Red AC，Acid Red 13，Orange II) in cosmetics． The different kinds of samples were treated with different preparation methods． The obtained liquid samples were analyzed by HPLC using a Diamonsil C18 column ( 250 mm × 4. 6 mm × 5μm) ． Methanol / ammonium acetate ( CH3COONH4) was used as the mobilephase for gradientelution． The wave length of detection is 240nm． The 7 colorants were separated with in 14 min． The average recoveries were from 90. 5% to 100. 6% with the relative standard deviations( RSDs) between 3. 2% and 6. 7%． The limits of detection ( LOD) were 3 mg /L except that Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate was 5 mg /L． The method is simple，rapid，accurate and suitable for the determination of 7 colorants．
Keywords: High performance liquid chromatography ( HPLC) ; Colorants; Cosmetics
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修改
Determination of 7 colorants in cosmetics by high performance liquid chromatography
(一般在标题中不写阿拉伯数字，可以写seven; 改成
Simutaneous determination of seven colorants in cosmetics with high performance liquid chromatography

单词拼写不对： ananalytical
修改
Abstract: An analytical method using high performance liquid chromatography with diode array detector( HPLC-DAD) has been developed for simultaneous determination of 7 colorants in cosmetics, ie.,  Ponceau，Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate，Food Yellow 3，Acid Red 33，Allura Red AC，Acid Red 13，Orange II．Different kinds of samples were pretreated, respectively．The obtained liquid samples were analyzed by HPLC using a Diamonsil C18 column ( 250 mm × 4. 6 mm × 5μm) ． Methanol / ammonium acetate ( CH3COONH4) was used as the mobile phase for gradient elution． The wave length of detection is 240nm． The seven colorants were separated within 14 min． The average recoveries varied from 90. 5% to 100. 6% with the relative standard deviations( RSDs) between 3. 2% and 6. 7%． The limits of detection ( LOD) were 3 mg /L except that Naphthol Yellow S Hydrate was 5 mg /L． The method is simple，rapid，accurate and suitable for the determination of 7 colorants in cosmetics．


（三）
原文
超高效液相色谱三重四极杆质谱法同时快速测定血浆和尿液中11 种杀鼠剂

摘要
建立了血浆和尿液中11 种杀鼠剂同时测定的超高效液相色谱串联质谱方法。血浆样品经乙腈沉淀、尿液样品经乙酸乙酯萃取，氮吹浓缩后用初始流动相复溶，在UPLC BEH C18柱上以甲醇-4 mmol /L 乙酸铵为流动相进行梯度洗脱分离，负离子电喷雾多反应监测模式检测，基质标准外标法定量分析。血浆和尿液中11 种杀鼠剂的加标回收率分别在68% ～ 118%和62% ～ 104%之间; 日内相对标准偏差分别为5． 6% ～ 21%和4． 1% ～ 18%; 日间相对标准偏差分别为8． 5% ～ 26% 和7． 1% ～ 25% ( n = 6) 。除尿液中安妥的定量限为5 μg /L 外，其余待测物的定量限均为1 μg /L。本方法灵敏度高，操作简单，适于中毒病人的快速诊断检测。

原文
Abstract
A method was developed for the determination of eleven rodenticides，antu，warfarin，brodifacoum，bromadiolone，coumachlor，coumatetralyl，difenacoum，flocoumafen，chlorophacinone and diphacinone，
in human plasma and urine using ultraperformance liquid chromatography-tandem mass spectrometry．Those rodenticides were extracted from plasma with acetonitrile and from urine with ethyl acetate． The extracts were dried by nitrogen stream and redissolved with the initial mobile phase． The analysis of the rodenticides was achieved on an UPLC BEH C18 column gradient eluted w ith the mobile phase of methanol and 4 mmol /L ammonium acetate solution in a cycle time of 7． 0 min，and detected by an electrospray ionization tandem mass
spectrometry in the multiple-reaction-monitoring negative mode． The average recoveries were 68% － 118% and 62% － 104% for all rodenticides in plasma and urine，respectively，with RSDs  of 5． 6% － 21% and 4. 1% － 18%( n = 6) ． The limits of quantitation were 1 μg /L ( S /N = 10) except that of antu in urine was
5 μg /L． The method was simple，selective and sensitive to detect the  rodenticides in plasma and urine for toxicological purposes．

Keywords Ultra performance liquid chromatography tandem mass spectrometry; Rodenticides; Plasma; Urine
Ultra performance liquid chromatography tandem mass spectrometry; Rodenticides; 太长，可以改成 UPLC-MS/MS
修改：
The average recoveries were in the range of 68%-118% and 62-104% for all.. with RSDs in the range of 5.6%-21% and 4.1%-18% (n=6), respectively.

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