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aassxx789

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[交流] please polish this sentence, thank you

The column temperature was 30℃ at the beginning, maintained for 5 min, then increased to 40℃ at 1℃min-1, then increased to 60℃ at 2℃min-1, then increased to 80℃ at 4℃/min, then increased to 150℃ at 6℃/min, then increased to 210℃ at 12℃/min.
please polish this sentence, thank you!
一个句子中有这么多then ,怎么修改啊
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Try to imitate the sentences in the articles which are from the acdemic periodicals.
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Floral-Cai

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aassxx789(金币+2): 谢谢参与
how about "The column temperature was 30℃ at the beginning, maintained for 5 min, then increased to 40℃ at 1℃min-1,  increased to 60℃ at 2℃min-1,  increased to 80℃ at 4℃/min, increased to 150℃ at 6℃/min,finally increased to 210℃ at 12℃/min."
delete all the "then"except the first one ,others will still get your points

@winter_north ,how do you think about it ?

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I agree with the forth
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4楼: Originally posted by Floral-Cai at 2013-05-15 18:16:38
how about "The column temperature was 30℃ at the beginning, maintained for 5 min, then increased to 40℃ at 1℃min-1,  increased to 60℃ at 2℃min-1,  increased to 80℃ at 4℃/min, increased to ...

Yuanfang, ni zenme kan?

The initial temperature was 30 oC, and maintained at the temperature for 5 min, then was increased to 40 oC at 1 oC/min, (did not keep at this temperature?) to 60 oC at 2 oC/min, then to 80 oC at 4 oC/min, to 150 oC at 6 oC/min, finally the temperature was increased to 210 oC at 12 oC/min.



This is my opinion.
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