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[½»Á÷] please polish this sentence, thank you

The column temperature was 30¡æ at the beginning, maintained for 5 min, then increased to 40¡æ at 1¡æmin-1, then increased to 60¡æ at 2¡æmin-1, then increased to 80¡æ at 4¡æ/min, then increased to 150¡æ at 6¡æ/min, then increased to 210¡æ at 12¡æ/min.
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how about "The column temperature was 30¡æ at the beginning, maintained for 5 min, then increased to 40¡æ at 1¡æmin-1,  increased to 60¡æ at 2¡æmin-1,  increased to 80¡æ at 4¡æ/min, increased to 150¡æ at 6¡æ/min,finally increased to 210¡æ at 12¡æ/min."
delete all the "then"except the first one ,others will still get your points

@winter_north ,how do you think about it ?

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4Â¥2013-05-15 18:16:38
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5Â¥2013-05-15 19:56:47
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GC Prog Rate Parameters:
Init Temp: 30¡æ   Perhold:5 min,
Increased to 40¡æ£¬Rate: 1¡æ/min ,
Increased to 60¡æ£¬Rate: 2¡æ/min ,
Increased to 80¡æ£¬Rate: 4¡æ/min ,
Increased to 150¡æ£¬Rate: 6¡æ/min ,
Final Temp:210¡æ£¬Rate: 12¡æ/min ,
7Â¥2013-05-15 21:58:03
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4Â¥: Originally posted by Floral-Cai at 2013-05-15 18:16:38
how about "The column temperature was 30¡æ at the beginning, maintained for 5 min, then increased to 40¡æ at 1¡æmin-1,  increased to 60¡æ at 2¡æmin-1,  increased to 80¡æ at 4¡æ/min, increased to ...

Yuanfang, ni zenme kan?

The initial temperature was 30 oC, and maintained at the temperature for 5 min, then was increased to 40 oC at 1 oC/min, (did not keep at this temperature?) to 60 oC at 2 oC/min, then to 80 oC at 4 oC/min, to 150 oC at 6 oC/min, finally the temperature was increased to 210 oC at 12 oC/min.



This is my opinion.
6Â¥2013-05-15 20:42:39
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robotouch

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Maybe you can show it with a table or a diagram !
8Â¥2013-05-15 22:06:19
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tonylemon

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8Â¥: Originally posted by robotouch at 2013-05-15 22:06:19
Maybe you can show it with a table or a diagram !

I agree with you.
9Â¥2013-05-15 22:08:52
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weelgins

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Yuanfang, ni zenme kan?
10Â¥2013-05-15 22:26:31
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Try to imitate the sentences in the articles which are from the acdemic periodicals.
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