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liuqg1987

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[求助] 哪个大师能帮小弟修改一段英语语句 不胜感激

Since we found a significant change in growth of suspension cells (Fig. 3). The cell number was in a lower level before 4 h, but then rapidly raised with high budding rate and low mortality rate. When fermented for 16 h, the cell number achieved a maximum value of about ? million/mL, which was closed to industrial level. However, increased ethanol exhibited a strong inhibition on yeast cells in the later period of fermentation, which led to a low budding rate and high mortality rate, thereby showing a decreased tendency in cell number. In addition, after 11 batches, a layer of enriched cells was observed in some place of carrier surface with the naked eye, which was not in consistent with Choi et al. who reported that it was difficult to accumulate cells through repeated batch processes. This result indicated that cell immobilization can promote cell growth and not seriously affected by sludge and suspended solid in the cassava meal medium.
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liuqg1987

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8楼: Originally posted by yuxinnick at 2013-04-18 07:52:55
确实有些句子太长,越简单越好,写论文不是以前写作文,简单明了你得让审稿人快速看明白你表达的意思,从句越少越好

谢谢!
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LT_FU

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感谢参与,应助指数 +1
句子套句子,句子太长,用词不当。建议,先改成简单句
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2楼: Originally posted by LT_FU at 2013-04-17 20:42:34
句子套句子,句子太长,用词不当。建议,先改成简单句

这位大师  能否花点时间帮我改改么
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LT_FU

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你可以先把中文贴出来,然后也许可以对照着帮你改改
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