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Dear Prof. XX:

Thank you very much for checking this E-mail from your busy work.

My name is XX, a Ph.D in xx graduated from Prof. xx's lab. at xx University. The date of graduation was xx, 2012. As I am strongly interested in xx, I am looking for a postdoctoral position next years in order to enrich my interested knowledge and skills.

Recently, I visited the website of The University of xx and found your research field (especially in xx) fit my interests very well. Therefore, could I know that whether there is a vacant position provided for a postdoctoral researcher in your research group? My past research works and related experimental skills are listed as following, which might be useful in your research group.

The key words of my past research work include:
xxxxx,xxxx,xxxx,xxx,xxx,xxxx.

I had good experiences using the following equipments:
DSC(Differential scanning calormetry), EPMA(Electro probe microanalysis), XRD(X-ray diffraction), ICP-AES(Inductively coupled plasma atomic emission spectroscopy), xxx,xxx,xxxx.

Lastly, My curriculum vitae has been attached with this E-mail, could you check it at your convenience time? I am looking forward to hearing from you and wish there could be a good chance for me.

Thank you very much for your kind consideration.

Best wishes to you
Sincerely yours

xx

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