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[求助] 帮我润色一句话,汉译英,使它更流畅一些。

我的英语水平很低,大家帮我看看这段话中有没有什么毛病,可以加一些词,减一些词,谢谢大家
The micro-hardness distribution at interface zone between coating and substrate was presented in Fig. 9. Substrate micro-hardness of sample S1, S2 and S3 near the interface were respectively denoted by H1S/I, H2S/I and H3S/I, and coating micro-hardness of sample S1, S2 and S3 near the interface were respectively denoted by H1C/I, H2C/I and H3C/I.
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wxqtjw: 金币+2, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 谢谢 2013-03-22 19:11:26
The micro-hardness distributions at the interface between the coating and the substrate are presented in Fig. 9. The substrate micro-hardness of samples S1, S2, and S3 is denoted by H1S/I, H2S/I and H3S/I, respectively. The coating micro-hardness of samples S1, S2, and S3 is denoted by H1C/I, H2C/I and H3C/I, respectively.

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wxqtjw: 金币+3, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢 2013-03-22 19:11:41
1) 因为陈述的是观察到的事实,因此时态最好都用现在时.
2) denote by -----改为dente as
3) respectively 最好放在最后, 并且前面加个逗号。
4)Substrate micro-hardness ------ were 单复数不一致。建议改为一致。

LZ写的已经很不错了。
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