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[交流] review文章大修投稿了，求分析，求祝福！期待。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。

一篇review投soft matter，自己水平很一般，我个人觉得例子描述就是把人家的一个个推起来，完全不及大牛的约稿综述，但是“稍微”也提了一些对研究领域发展以及存在问题的看法与体会。
文章选的examples和切入点比较新，基本上是2010-2013年最新的研究工作，以以前发表的综述里面没有设计。这个方向国内基本没人做，只有前两年有人发了三篇相关的文章，但是都没有系统性的研究。还有就是我们组在做这个方向，目前我们只在相关领域发表了两篇研究论文，一个中文SCI综述。所以，我们是个这个领域的新手，刚入门。
国外这个领域研究情况，主要是日本三个组，美国两个组在做，其中日本的组是鼻祖，大牛，牛文近百篇，当然也有高档次的综述。

各位达人给分析分析大修后有戏没，期待中................................

一审意见：
审稿人A
I feel that this is an interesting review on the........
有一章需要重写，提了一些概念问题，说我们没说清楚。

审稿人B
英语很烂。This paper touches on a very timely subject, but there is a strong need for fact checking. Furthermore, the paper must be edited for language--the English is quite poor.
不是大牛。The authors are not particular experts in this area--they have only published two papers on this topic. While that is not necessarily a problem, it may suggest that additional reviewers--the ones with their work cited-- look at it for accuracy.
两个新文献。Finally, it is noteworthy that two papers relevant this topic have been published recently that the authors might want to look at. Notably, these papers were published after they submitted this manuscript but the authors might consider looking at them for their revised paper.

Again, the paper is timely, but this manuscript needs major revision to improve the English and make sure that all the facts are right.

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