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The average adhesive force and chewiness of buffalo milk yoghurts were  significantly higher than in control yoghurt, by 0.155 N and 1.947mJ respectively (p<0.05). Whereas , the average cohesiveness was 0.201 lower than the control yoghurt (p<0.05). However, there were no significant differences among buffalo milk yoghurts (p>0.05).
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有一句话,修正一下
In contrast, the average cohesiveness was lower than that of control yoghurt by 0.201 (p<0.05).
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The average adhesive force and chewiness of buffalo milk yoghurts were significantly higher than that of control yoghurt, by 0.155 N and 1.947mJ respectively (p<0.05). In contrast, the average cohesiveness was 0.201 lower than that of control yoghurt (p<0.05). No significant difference was observed among different buffalo milk yoghurts.
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