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moxiang

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05年10月中科院A卷作文:

what does work mean to you? it is a just a means to make ends meet, to cover life enpenses?

我的作文: 用时近一个小时,因为是复习考博以来的第一篇作文 所以很艰难! 完事开头难!

what does work mean to you? Two main kings of answers have been offered. One is couched in terms of realism. they argue that it is just a means to make ends meet, to cover life enpenses. The other, in my view correct, type fo answer is that it is a way to realize one's dream and the source of happiness. To me, a college teacher, I teach students knoeledge and gain happiness from them.

第一段,要去接孩子了,后续会上第二段,第三段。
PS   一大把年纪了还要考博,悲催啊!!!
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moxiang

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谢谢楼上的,
接着贴 第二段:

when I was a colledge student, my teacher once told me that there were three types of teachers: the first type of teachers who looked teaching just a way to earn money were always ready to give up teaching to earn more; the second type looked teaching not only as  a good salary, but as an enterprise to do; the third  of teachers, however, who looked teaching as well as arts devoted their whole life to teaching.

From then on, I never forgot to be the third type teacher. And I gained not only a good salary, but and more important, happiness and a meaningful life. I was so exciting when my students understood a difficult question or even more solve it by themselves, and I was so happy and wormful when they sent me a card on the Teacher's Day! I tought them knowledge and they gave me happiness and moreover, the meaning of life.
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moxiang

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送鲜花一朵
谢谢楼上的   学到不少 犯了很多显而易见的错误   不动手写作文很多年了  很多单词都拼错了!
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moxiang

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谢谢啦 今年4月考试顺利通过  现在正在努力适应博士的生活 写作确实不好  只能加强练习了
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