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河洛人

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下面这段话查了一上午字典,还是没彻底搞明白,请高手帮忙翻译,多谢多谢
At the end of the paint line, the application of transport coatings, wrap up of coated cars for company design on a commercial fleet, as well as safety measures, all become part of the coating processes connected with the manufacture of cars [8]. Quality assurance has reached a new dimension for automotive OEM paints and coatings. While time-consuming batch-to-batch approvals of the customer’s specifications has been the order of the day, supporting-system approaches, for example, audit-management systems according to DIN-ISO 9001 and 14001, ISO/TS 16949, QS 9000 or VDA 6.1, have become mandatory for the paint industry to be approved as a supplier to the automotive industry. So, right from the beginning, the development of new products has to be quality oriented to ‘zero defect’ levels through all the steps leading up to the delivery status.

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河洛人: 金币+40, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常感谢您的耐心回复。这次终于明白了,谢谢! 2012-11-29 10:43:16
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3楼: Originally posted by 河洛人 at 2012-11-28 16:36:09
觉得“顾客对于油漆批次之间的许可程序一般耗时长久,这也是一种普遍现象”,这句话意思有点不太顺,能再翻译一下吗...

While time-consuming batch-to-batch approvals of the customer’s specifications has been the order of the day
确实这里最难的就是这一句,这里面如果按照提取关键词的思路,“顾客的规格(要求)的耗时的,批次之间的许可”“the order of the day”含义很广泛,中文里可翻译成“蔚然成风”、“当务之急”或者“议事日程”的,英文解释是大概就是应该要做的事情。
难点在于前面的形容词太长了,所以分句处理:“顾客为了达到自身的规格要求,对批次之间的许可程序耗时较长,这也是油漆厂商正在面临和亟待解决的问题”,这个译文我觉得看还是应该看得懂吧。
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220chengeng

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河洛人: 金币+30, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助, 非常感谢您的回复!后半部分翻译的挺好的,但是觉得前半部分还可以改进,您看是还能修改吗 2012-11-28 16:29:01
At the end of the paint line, the application of transport coatings, wrap up of coated cars for company design on a commercial fleet, as well as safety measures, all become part of the coating processes connected with the manufacture of cars [8]. Quality assurance has reached a new dimension for automotive OEM paints and coatings. While time-consuming batch-to-batch approvals of the customer’s specifications has been the order of the day, supporting-system approaches, for example, audit-management systems according to DIN-ISO 9001 and 14001, ISO/TS 16949, QS 9000 or VDA 6.1, have become mandatory for the paint industry to be approved as a supplier to the automotive industry. So, right from the beginning, the development of new products has to be quality oriented to ‘zero defect’ levels through all the steps leading up to the delivery status.

在油漆流水线的末端,车辆油漆的涂刷工艺、公司对于商业车队油漆的整体包装以及有关的安全措施等,这些都是与车辆制造有关的油漆工艺的构成部分。而质量的保证对汽车油漆或涂料贴牌生产厂家又提出了新的标准和要求。如今,顾客对于油漆批次之间的许可程序一般耗时长久,这也是一种普遍现象,因此运用支持性系统方法,如基于DIN-ISO 9001、14001和ISO/TS 16949、QS 9000 或VDA 6.1的审计管理体系,已经成为涂料行业供应商进入汽车行业的准入性强制要求。因此,在开发和生产新产品的每个工艺环节中,应从最开始就将质量标准控制为“零缺陷”的水平,并一直保持到产品交付阶段。
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2楼: Originally posted by 220chengeng at 2012-11-28 16:12:39
At the end of the paint line, the application of transport coatings, wrap up of coated cars for company design on a commercial fleet, as well as safety measures, all become part of the coating proce ...

觉得“顾客对于油漆批次之间的许可程序一般耗时长久,这也是一种普遍现象”,这句话意思有点不太顺,能再翻译一下吗
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河洛人: 金币+10, 有帮助, 非常感谢您的回复!“汽车涂料和涂料贴牌制造商的质量保证已经被提升到一个新的高度。”和“所以,从一开始,新产品的开发就必须以质量为导向,直到运送交货为止,中间所有环节都要达到“零缺陷”水准。”这两句翻译的好,其余部分个人觉得还可以翻译的更好些,麻烦您再看看 2012-11-28 16:50:26
220chengeng: 金币+2, 感谢应助,辛苦了。 2012-11-28 19:47:34
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在油漆流水线终端,交通涂料的应用,针对公司商用车设计的涂层汽车包装,以及安全措施,全部都成了汽车制造涂层工艺的一部分[8]。汽车涂料和涂料贴牌制造商的质量保证已经被提升到一个新的高度。虽然批量地许可准客户的要求已经成为常态,而且耗时,但支撑系统方法,如根据DIN-ISO9001和14001、ISO / TS 16949、QS 9000或VDA 6.1的审计管理系统,已经成为汽车涂料供应商的一条强制性的行业准入指令。所以,从一开始,新产品的开发就必须以质量为导向,直到运送交货为止,中间所有环节都要达到“零缺陷”水准。
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