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[求助] 求审稿人意见 翻译。

今天收到了我投稿的一个SCI杂志的审稿人意见。编辑说：一个审稿人完全同意接受，但第二个审稿人却建议退稿，所以希望我能按照第二个审稿人的意见修改。
那厮给我了6个建议。但有的建议我看得不是很明白，用红颜色划出来了，请大家帮忙翻译一下，我答应在两周内给出修改稿，谢谢了。
Reviewer #2: 1. The paper is not clearly stated how the achievement of proposed method is performed;
2. The notation and definition used in the section 2 should be clearly stated beforehand to smooth the reading;
3. There are a lot of typos in the paper such as
    in page 2 " ....image is visible if any t (or more) of the participants are stacked together, but totally invisible if fewer .....",
    it should be modified as " .... image is visible if any t (or more) of participants are stacked together, but is totally invisible if ....";
4. The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper such as
    "..the new system doesn't need a security channel and the cost of the system can be lowered; the size of the shadow image is smaller than the original image; the new scheme is also a multi-use scheme...."
5. The analysis is so loose that the reader cannot see the enhancement of the proposed algorithm; in addition, a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it.
6. The simulation need to compare with the work of Chien-Lin's scheme to show the difference.
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haohao369

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There are a lot of typos in the paper 文章有很多错别字
The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper
下面的句子不能表达出这篇文章的推理过程
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2楼2007-07-03 21:08:57
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夏雨静

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There are a lot of typos in the paper 文章有许多打字错误
The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper
下面的句子不能明确给出这篇文章的推论
a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it.
运算法则的错误编排不能显现出全面的观点
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3楼2007-07-03 21:24:06
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hljbhs

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There are a lot of typos in the paper 文中有不少打字错误；
The paper is not clearly stated how the achievement of proposed method is performed   该文中，所述方法是如何得到 该成果（结论）的，论述不清。
The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper
下文思路不清
a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it.
运算法则编排的似乎并未反应全貌
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4楼2007-07-04 08:09:23
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There are a lot of typos in the paper
文章中存在很多语法错去
The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper
文章中某些相邻的句子缺乏逻辑性
a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it
可能是指你模拟的一个特殊的数学计算公式不具有普遍性
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5楼2007-07-04 08:31:26
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chuanliang888

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There are a lot of typos in the paper 在这篇文章中有很多书写错误的地方
The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper
下面的句子不能明确表达出这篇文章的推理
a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it.
运算法则的错误编排似乎不能反应出全面的观点
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6楼2007-07-04 08:54:46
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a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it.

运算法则中的假设似乎没有代表性。

那两个句子没有什么更好的翻译了
加油吧
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There are a lot of typos in the paper 这篇论文中有许多打字错误
The adjacent sentences can not give the inference of the thinking of the paper
某些相邻的句子不能分析出这篇文章的关键推论
a pseudo code of the algorithm does not appear to have the global view of it.
错误编排的运算法则不能显现出总的观点
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