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我写的abstract长句如何写短，请高手出招，不胜感谢！
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这是我写的摘要的第一句话，我觉得太长，如何定成短句呢？请高手出手相助！不胜感谢！ To probe the molecular packing in crystalline domains of an unsymmetrical poly(benzoxazole-imide) introduced alternating phenylbenzoxazole units and bisphthalimide units by the two-step polymerization method using AIB and BPA, the crystal structure of its model compound PA-BOA was investigated using powder wide-angle X-ray diffraction (WAXD) combined with molecular modeling using Materials Studio program. |
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phu_grassman: 金币+1, nice try. 2012-11-07 13:52:14
lhy1976: 金币+15, ★★★★★最佳答案 2012-11-24 22:03:14
phu_grassman: 金币+1, nice try. 2012-11-07 13:52:14
lhy1976: 金币+15, ★★★★★最佳答案 2012-11-24 22:03:14
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你的句子确实太长了，写论文的主要目的是让人看懂，不要追求复杂的句式和语法。审稿人也许英语也不是母语，即使是母语，他们也愿意看到简单的句式，方便理解。对你的领域不太了解，简单分解下吧。 The two-step polymerization method using AIB and BPA was employed to probe the molecular packing in crystalline domains of an unsymmetrical poly(benzoxazole-imide) introduced alternating phenylbenzoxazole units and bisphthalimide units. The crystal structure of its (whose? you have two chemical units) model compound PA-BOA was investigated using powder wide-angle X-ray diffraction (WAXD) and molecular modeling using Materials Studio program. |
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