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Reviewer #1: strenth should be corrected as strength in Highlights 1 and 2.

In experimental section it was said that hardness tests were performed. There is not any results of hardness tests in the manuscript.

The changes in the strength, elongation and fracture toughness with addition of Mn or Zr should be explained in detail. The explanation should include microstructural point of view.



Reviewer #2: Better the conclusion be one single paragraph ony.
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