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sjzhang156

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[求助] 帮忙看下这句话对不对,有关composed of的

Besides, the SDE equipment composed of a heater, one or two round-bottom flask and a condensing tube is complex and space-occupying.
本人的意思是想表的这个SDE装置复杂而且占的空间比较大,但是又捎带说一下它的构造,不知道这样写合适不?
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chelinran

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sjzhang156: 金币+3, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★★★最佳答案, 我觉得这个最合适了,多谢了 2012-10-10 08:17:43
sjzhang156: 回帖置顶 2012-10-10 08:17:54
可以的,再改进一下,如下:
Besides, the SDE equipment, which is composed of a heater, one or two round-bottom flasks and a condensing tube, is complex and takes up too much room/space.

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4楼2012-10-09 23:46:42
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sjzhang156: 金币+2, ★★★很有帮助, 我觉得不错,后来看了后面的在composed前面加一个which是不是更合适啊 2012-10-10 08:24:28
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Besides, the SDE equipment, composed of a heater, one or two round-bottom flask and a condensing tube, is complex and space-occupying.
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2楼2012-10-09 21:53:18
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yunqi_2000

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采用解释说明形式。
the SDE equipment is complex and space-occupying; it is composed of a heater, one or two round-bottom flask and a condensing tube.
这个是写在文章中?感觉有点别扭,呵呵。难道the SDE equipment is composed of a heater, one or two round-bottom flask and a condensing tube这样不能让相关读者有复杂和占空间?强调复杂和占空间有什么作用?
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3楼2012-10-09 22:03:55
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3脗楼: Originally posted by yunqi_2000 at 2012-10-09 22:03:55
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the SDE equipment is complex and space-occupying; it is composed of a heater, one or two round-bottom flask and a condensing tube.
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