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各位虫友，本人第一篇SCI论文今收到返修意见，第一审稿人不推荐，第二审稿人提的意见很多也很深刻（如下），感觉有点迷茫，请指点有没有修改的必要？ Title: An ******* Reliability Engineering & System Safety Reviewers have now commented on your paper. You will see that they are advising that you revise your manuscript.For your guidance, reviewers' comments are appended below. If you decide to revise the work, please submit a list of changes or a rebuttal against each point which is being raised when you submit the revised manuscript. Editor/Reviewer comments: Reviewer #1: Please, find enclosed the attached file Reviewer #2: The manuscript presents a promising methodology. However, it requires major revisions involving, in particular, what concerns the pratical application of the approach proposed using a GA. MINOR COMMENTS: 1) Include a list of acronyms 2) Include a list of symbols 3) Check Eqn (15), C(x) = TC/W ?? 4) Format references according to RESS MAJOR COMMENTS 1) Provide more details on the fundamentals for Eqn. (16) or provide reference to previous work to justify its use. 2) Give details about the GA used: 2.1 Sort of GA (single-objective, steady state GA, ...) 2.2 Encoding of individuals in the population (real or integer encoding, parameters being encoded, ... 2.3 Step 3 is unclear. Provide more details on how the fitness function is obtained (formulation), in particular considering both Eqn (15) and (16), the later being the constraint. Thus, explain how the constraint are addressed in the GA performance (adopting a sort of penalization, etc ??) 3) Section 5 Empirical results provides the example of application. Need major improvement 3.1 Describe the physical item under study (is it a real equipment or just a numerical example) A real example is more approprite for the RESS audience 3.2 Provide more details on the results found for C(x), p(x) and what is represented in Tables and Figures. For example, now it is not easy to relize what a solution satisfy (or not) the constraint, p. 4) Conclusion section is of limited value. They are not based on a real and practical example of the methodology (a real system consisting of several components). The example of application is too simple for testing both the model and the GA. [ Last edited by zongshengl on 2012-9-19 at 11:47 ] |
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