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hello_毛毛虫: 回帖置顶 2012-09-06 01:13:29
（6）原文：Then, the permeability test is designed to verify the grout effect.
Q: 这句话，问题不大，但这里的 the permeability test 是否写成 a permeability test 比较好，permeability test应该是有很多种类，否则就不必 design 了。
（7）The calculated diffusion radius coincides with experimental results, and the permeability meets the requirements of the project, which is valuable for the anti-seepage treatment in gravel foundation
Q: diffusion radio是本文非常关键的词, 应该更加慎重使用。可以GOOGLE到准确说法是 effective diffusion radio。另外本文是一个复合句，and 前是一个句子，之后是另一个句子，所以which is valuable for the anti-seepage treatment in gravel foundation。到底是说哪个呢？显然，应该是指两者(diffusion radius/ permeability)都 valuable? 但如果是说两者，那么语法错了。
以上是摘要部分，接下来看引言
(8) In China, gravel foundation is often applied in the hydroelectric-constructions.
Q:碎石结构（墙），被应用到水电建设，好像gravel foundation是什么高新科技一样，直接写成used，不就可以了吗？
（9）For complicated aquatic materials with, strong permeability and uneven distribution of porosity, a series of problems in construction might be encountered.
Q: with，看似小错误，其实很离谱。strong permeability and uneven distribution of porosity,直接把uneven distribution of 写成anisotropic，strong permeability and anisotropic porosity，读起来顺多了。might be encountered，应写成 may be
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