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Referee: This paper really needs to be proof read by an English native or by someone fluent in English, because the number of grammatical errors is huge.

我只能回: Sorry for our poor English. We have tried our best to improve the English writting.

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Over the Past decades，partially coherent beams have been extensively investigated and have found wide applications in many fields，such as free-space optical communications，material thermal processing by laser beam，laser scanning，inertial confinement fusion by laser，nonlinear optics and imaging applications. Recently，the characterization and propagation of partially coherent beams are topics of considerable interest. The partially coherent sources could produce the same far-field intensity distribution as a laser. Moreover, the partially coherent beams are demonstrated to have advantage over the spatially completely coherent beams. So here we further study of partially coherent pulsed beam modulation instability.
When two or more optical fields having different wavelengths propagate simultaneously inside a medium, they interact with each other through the medium nonlinearity. The medium nonlinearity can also couple two fields through cross-phase modulation without inducing any energy transfer between them. The physical system please see G. P. Agrawal Nonlinear Fiber Optics, 3rd Edition.Our proposed equation (1), it applied to the two optical fields in Kerr medium, because his cross-phase modulation, so need to use the last one in equation (1) to describe.
As we discuss problems of two optical fields of partially coherent light, therefore, must be use the concept of the statistical average. The equation (1) of the further research on the reference [16]. The second page of the revised manuscript, we further described in equation (1).
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昵称让人头疼: 金币+2, 同感，感谢热心应助~ 2012-07-14 09:39:09

我相关专业的，但是有几句我完全看不懂。。。。我勉强照着你原来的句子转成语法正确的句子，但是仍然感觉怪怪
前面还好，从moreover开始：
Moreover, the partially coherent beams have demonstrated their advantages over the spatially completely coherent beams. In the current study, we will further investigate the modulation instability of partially coherent pulsed beams.

When two or more optical fields of different wavelengths propagate simultaneously in a medium, they interact with each other through （这个到底是什么意思，通过？建议查其他参考文献确认）the medium nonliearity, which can couple these two fields by cross-phase modulation without inducing any energy transfer between them. A detailed discription of the physical system can be found in xxxxx. Here we propose an equation (xxx) which applies to both optical fields in Kerr medium. Corresponding to the cross-phase modulation of Kerr medium, the last formula in equation 1 will be used.

The concept of statistical average must be induced as we discuss the optical fields of partically coherent light. A further reserach 我完全看不懂这句是要讲么。。。。。