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Reviewer(s)' Comments to Author:

This is a standard hot deformation study on xxx. The experimental design seems to be good and the results were analyzed correctly based on the methods proposed in base hot deformation references such as Reference [9]. The results and discussions section seems to be well prepared and reasonable and can be used conveniently in industry. However, some minor but important revisions are required:
(1) The Introduction, Section 2.2, Section 2.3, Section 3.1, and Section 3.2 are based on the methods proposed in Reference [9] and another paper (xxxx, Metallurgical and Materials Transactions A 40 (2009) 2950-2958). However, the authors have not considered these references in their paper in an appropriate manner. It is required to cite these references in the aforementioned sections in each paragraph. Since the current work has been done on another steel and good results were achieved, this referencing will increase the quality of the work.
(2) Some grammatical errors and incomplete sentences are present in the text and should be corrected.
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