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Please tell me the gap between this passage and genuine english,thanks a lot!
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sorry ,i cannot agree with you. i think the sentence ¡ª¡ª the weather is not too bad¡ª¡ª is more or less good. even in the forein country ,it is often spoken. |
7Â¥2012-06-14 16:35:18
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4Â¥2012-06-14 15:51:40
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5Â¥2012-06-14 16:03:57
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fungixx: ½ð±Ò+3, oh,da shan, you did a good job` 2012-06-14 16:49:59
fungixx: »ØÌûÖö¥ 2012-06-14 16:50:01
fungixx: ½ð±Ò+3, oh,da shan, you did a good job` 2012-06-14 16:49:59
fungixx: »ØÌûÖö¥ 2012-06-14 16:50:01
uh,there still some chinglish ,for example:"the weather is not too bad",a standard chinglish... and you use so many "hehe" in your writing. anyhow,your english is good ,come on,you can write such a long text already. looking forward to your further articles ~ |
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uh,there still some chinglish ,
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