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hongsai2011

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Dear Dr.McArthur,
    Hope everything  goes well. Now I send you my experimental plan in PDF and PPT document  with  the introduction  of  my institutional authority .
     I  am  willing to  pay  for  shipping.however,I have no Federal Express account, and  establishing a Federal Express account is of great trouble .I would ask if there is anyway else I can pay for the shipping.
    Look  forward  to  hearing  from  you.
    With  my  best regards,
    Hongsai Chen
说明:我向老外要细胞,他同意了,但他要我给个实验计划以及机构学术权威的介绍,另外还问我有没有联邦快递账号?意思是让我付运费

我要表达的意思是这样的:  愿一切顺利,我现在将自己的实验计划以PPT和PDF2种文件格式都发给你,另外还有机构学术权威的介绍。  我愿意支付运费,但我没有联邦快递账号,而且建个账号非常麻烦费时间精力,我想问是否有其他办法我来付运费  (其实我想让老外用他的账号付了运费,然后我通过其他办法把钱给他,但都不知道如何中文表达意思,更不用说英文了)


求各位高手指教,尤其是最后一句话,怎么说才好,谢谢
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richard_512

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sltmac: 金币+1 2012-06-09 09:29:55
hongsai2011: 金币+15, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2012-06-10 17:21:34
Correction:  1. space between Dr. and McArthur

Dear Dr. McArthur,
Hope everything  goes well.
Now I send you my experimental plan as attached PDF and PPT documents  with  the introduction of the academic authority of my research institution.

I  am  willing to  pay the shipping fee. But I have no Federal Express account, and  establishing a Federal Express account is of great trouble. I would like to ask if there are any other ways for me to pay the shipping fee.

Look  forward  to  hearing  from  you.

With  best regards,
Hongsai Chen
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hongsai2011

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2楼: Originally posted by richard_512 at 2012-06-09 00:57:11
Correction:  1. space between Dr. and McArthur

Dear Dr. McArthur,
Hope everything  goes well.
Now I send you my experimental plan as attached PDF and PPT documents  with  the introduction of th ...

你好,我问一个关于格式的问题,一般发e-mail的时候,除了开头,Dear。。外,下面的每段是否有必要空两格?
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