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1121prettycat

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[求助] 求助一段话翻译

暴露期结束后,通过将高剂量组脾脏的切片与对照组比较观察发现,高剂量组脾脏红髓内充盈大量的红细胞。恢复期结束后,高剂量组的脾脏红髓红细胞略多于对照组,但差别不明显。这说明AHTN暴露会损伤脾脏的正常功能,引起脾脏肿大,导致红细胞在脾脏内的大量堆积,但这种损伤是可逆的。
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sltmac: 金币+1 2012-06-04 09:19:50
1121prettycat: 金币+50, 翻译EPI+1, ★★★很有帮助 2012-06-07 10:38:41
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Exposure period ended, through the high dose group of the biopsy of the spleen compared with the discovery, high dose group of spleen red intramedullary large amounts of red blood cells filled with convalescence, high dose group of spleen red pulp red blood cells slightly more than the control group, but the difference is not obvious that this AHTN exposure would damage the normal function of the spleen, cause the spleen enlargement, cause in the spleen of red blood cells in substantial accumulation, but the damage is reversible
奋斗吧
2楼2012-06-04 07:20:24
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1121prettycat

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楼上的翻译貌似是直接用有道词典翻译的吧
3楼2012-06-07 10:48:01
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1121prettycat: 金币+50, ★★★很有帮助, 多谢,翻译的真的很用心 2012-06-08 13:23:26
上面的翻译太恶心了。。看完第一句话就蛋疼了。。明显的翻译软件
不过有好多专业词汇不太懂。。用上面的专业词汇 加上自己的语法帮个忙吧。。
望楼主修改下。。
After the exposure period, comparing the high-dose group of the  spleen slice (不知道切片是不是应该翻成slice。也不知道脾脏是不是应该翻译成spleen。话说楼上居然把高剂量组的“组”翻译成了器官组织。。囧。。那个组明显应该是group) with the control group(对照组肯定要翻译成control group 这个我还是有点儿印象的。), we've found that the spleen red pulp of high-dose group is filled with great amount of red cells(话说红髓是不是应该是red pulp?). After the recovery period,  we've found that red cells in the spleen red pulp of the high-dose group is slightly more than that of the control group, while the difference is not obvious. All the above(是以上所有吧?) demonstrates that the exposure of the AHTN will damage(这个词不太确定。。。囧)the normal function of the spleen, causing the enlargement(肿大是这个词么?。太专业了,囧) of spleen, and which will lead to the accumulation of red cells in spleen. However, the damage is reversible.


好吧 上面儿有点儿乱。。重新贴一遍。。lz用的时候要仔细看看上面的说明哎~
After the exposure period, comparing the high-dose group of the  spleen slice with the control group, we've found that the spleen red pulp of high-dose group is filled with great amount of red cells. After the recovery period,  we've found that red cells in the spleen red pulp of the high-dose group is slightly more than that of the control group, while the difference is not obvious. All the above demonstrates that the exposure of the AHTN will damage the normal function of the spleen, causing the enlargement of spleen, and which will lead to the accumulation of red cells in spleen. However, the damage is reversible.
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