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nx8011

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[求助] (高难度)BB求帮忙解答这个老外的审稿提问!非常感谢!

(高难度)BB求帮忙解答这个老外的审稿提问!非常感谢!老外审稿直接在我提交的文章中,而其在其它手写的英文我又看不太懂,求各位高手帮忙解答一下哈,谢谢,现粘上一小部分本人不懂的老外原笔记。




































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不是一个专业的,很难看懂。
建议问问同行,或者问编辑
2楼2012-05-24 14:30:11
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nx8011: 金币+1, ★★★很有帮助 2012-05-24 14:35:55
第一个:This is too vague.这太模糊了.
说明你写得不清楚
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nx8011

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3楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-05-24 14:34:58:
第一个:This is too vague.这太模糊了.
说明你写得不清楚

谢谢
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nx8011: 金币+2, ★★★★★最佳答案, 非常正确。 2012-05-24 14:40:43


There should be a space before ??? year.
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nx8011

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5楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-05-24 14:38:26:
http://edu.muchong.com/attachment/1d/e3/1784671_1337840875_911.jpg

There should be a space before ??? year.

是的,他帮我在里面在年之前几了空格。非常感谢。
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nx8011: 金币+2, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢了 2012-05-24 14:48:24

meaning unclear "?"  Do you mean dispersal?
“?”这个词的意思不清楚,你的意思是“dispersal”这个词吗?如果是,就用dispersal替换你原来用的那个词
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7楼: Originally posted by nono2009 at 2012-05-24 14:46:54:
http://edu.muchong.com/attachment/64/96/1784671_1337840877_175.jpg
meaning unclear "?"  Do you mean dispersal?
“?”这个词的意思不清楚,你的意思是“dispersal”这个词吗?如果是,就用dispers

非常感谢了哈。
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nx8011: 金币+12, ★★★★★最佳答案, 谢谢了哈。 2012-05-24 14:53:16
This is too vague.

In full at the start of a sentence.

There should be a space before each year.

if of current interest.

A non-toxic insecticide is not much use. Also there is no evidence that plant extracts will not select for resistance just as quickly as conventional drugs

Meaning unclear-'transmission'? do you mean dispersal?

It is important that you provide some detail about how clinical was measured.

By 'all' scabs do you mean that the left ear was completely cleared of any scab material? You need to be very precise here. Or do you just mean some or most scabs were removed?
Was tgus done at each inspection? OR just once?

Were both ears treated?
How much (volume) of the extract was administered
How was it applied, how did you ensure it stayed in the ear. Did you tape the ear closed after administration or use a cotton wool plug-etc.

It's not clear this means

AGAIN DETAIL NEEDED
Refer to Table 1

as the percentage change in mite numbers before and after treatment
Summarise in the text.

Does it actually make any difference what softwareyou used-do they give different answers?

Your paper must 'stand alone' ie you need to explain what you did, not just expect your readers to refer to previous papers.

Biblography formatting needs attention-at present it is inconsistent.

What are these numbers?
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nx8011

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9楼: Originally posted by ahelix at 2012-05-24 14:51:44:
This is too vague.

In full at the start of a sentence.

There should be a space before each year.

if of current interest.

A non-toxic insecticide is not much use. Also there is no evidence

非常感谢了。
10楼2012-05-24 14:53:25
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