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2010年 12月  CET-6
            my view on univedsity ranking
      Undoubtedly , university ranking  has penertrated people's lives and arouse much attention among the general public as well as colledge campus. Actually,it is disputable reach an argument on the issue of university ranking .Because ,people at different stands hold different opinions .As for me ,the argument on the issue will be elobrate as follows.
      Factors contributing to the phenomenon that university ranking  are fairly kaleidscopic and complicated . To be brief,the major ones are listed here.Initially,the quality of university is raised can be attribute to  the developement of  the enconomy.university ranking will be help to assure the quality of them.Plus,different university has different character,government wanna stimulate their more multy that adopt the deed of unversity ranking .Ultimately, it can stimulate teachers and students work more harder.consequently,their campus rank more high.
         As far as i am concerned , every coin has two side,Neverthless,,university ranking does encourage the developement and growth of university.Thus,we should inspire the advantage of university ranking  and abandon its disadvantage .

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随便瞟了眼，说实话感觉像一篇四级作文，还不是比较好的那种。
首先，楼主拼写错误不少，这种低级错误一定要避免，也包括单复数、比较级等词形变化等；
because不能单独引导一个句子，plus也一样；
六级是正式规范写作，不是随口便谈的口语，wanna绝不允许出现；
标点符号不要乱用乱点，该是一个逗号就一个

具体内容我没怎么看，但就句子来讲，长句复杂句还可以再多一点，如果你能驾驭，
毕竟是六级作文；段落结构也太过简单，像四级了，尽量在中间段论述更详细些。

注意细节、严谨和规范，祝福楼主