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Better to face it bravely than to curse the darkness of the reality,A man failed in protecting all what he loves should have a great courage to stand up and never to quit.这句话有多少语病， [ Last edited by 幽情魔鬼 on 2012-5-1 at 00:35 ] |
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Better to face it bravely than to curse the darkness of the reality,为甚么你们都把这句改了呢？这句应该没错啊，与其诅咒现实的黑暗，不如勇敢的去面对，网上有这个句型吧，A man failed in protecting all what he loves should have a great courage to stand up and never to quit这句failed in doing sth，也可以啊 ，用分词作定语不行吗？非要加个who？那个a great courage 还是the，我不清楚，我表示的是现在完成时，时态有误吗 |
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Better to face it bravely than to curse the darkness of the reality,A man failed in protecting all what he loves should have a great courage to stand up and never to quit. 语法有点小问题 感觉别扭 我给改一下吧～； You'd better face it bravely rather than cursing the darkness of the reality A man who failed in protecting all what he loves should have a great courage to stand up and never to quit~~  |
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