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Better to face it bravely than to curse the darkness of the reality,A man failed in protecting all what he loves should  have a great courage to stand up and never to quit.这句话有多少语病,

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7楼: Originally posted by fengruiling at 2012-05-02 10:52:58:
在5楼的基础上再修改一下
You'd better face the darkness of the reality bravely rather than curse it .
A man who fails to protect all taht he loves should  have the great courage to stand up and ne ...

Better to face it bravely than to curse the darkness of the reality,为甚么你们都把这句改了呢?这句应该没错啊,与其诅咒现实的黑暗,不如勇敢的去面对,网上有这个句型吧,A man failed in protecting all what he loves should  have a great courage to stand up and never to quit这句failed in doing sth,也可以啊 ,用分词作定语不行吗?非要加个who?那个a great courage 还是the,我不清楚,我表示的是现在完成时,时态有误吗
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大概是3个语病。。。。
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2楼: Originally posted by fjtony163 at 2012-05-01 06:17:40:
大概是3个语病。。。。

指一下哦
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刘秀玉: 金币+1, Thx ,gangzai 2012-05-01 10:38:41
幽情魔鬼: 金币+3, ★★★★★最佳答案, 还好吧,我英语不好 2012-05-01 21:47:16
Better to face it bravely than to curse the darkness of the reality,A man failed in protecting all what he loves should  have a great courage to stand up and never to quit.
语法有点小问题 感觉别扭
我给改一下吧~;
You'd better face it bravely rather than cursing the darkness of the reality
A man who failed in protecting all what he loves should  have a great courage to stand up and never to quit~~
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