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zhzimi_2007

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9楼: Originally posted by seapass at 2012-04-11 09:56:16:
那也很正常,两次的审稿意见应该不一样了吧

我把最近的审稿意见发给您,您帮我看看:
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Reviewer #1:

In my side of view this paper has some originality regarding to its application. Even, the author tries to mix different theories with each others, finally it give a bright-full results. However, I think there are lots of area that should be corrected and I think it was because of different amendments which were added to this paper after its first review.
1- The introduction is completely vast however it becomes to complicated while it just speak about history of the methods in details but it doesn't go through their application and definitions in general during introduction of the paper. I recommend author to re-structured the introduction and make it more readable for scholars.
2- It is a necessary to add a graphical chart at the end of introduction to avoid complication among history. the graphical chart should show the different areas that author mentioned about them and then it should illustrate the interactions and finally the contribution of this paper should be stared in the figure. It help to show the area of knowledge that author was explored in his study.
3- the contribution of this paper should be more highlighted at the end of introduction.  
4- some small English errors should be corrected such as page one, line 48, in the middle, it should be "in recent years,..."
5- the structure of paper does not obey the standard form of normal academic papers, maybe some definitions should come under methodology, and results and discussions should be more highlighted rather than lots of complicated Remarks.
6- Since the strength of this paper is more in its application, it needs to be more strong on this issue. The examples should be more applied and even some example could be comparative example which shows any differences between this method and previous ones.
7- In page 3, Line 30, It is not suitable for academic paper to use  "we"!
8- The procedure of this method should be illustrated by aid of graphical chart.
9- Conclusion should be more precise.
10- Using lots of references even at the end of the paper in remarks and results is not common and suitable at all. maybe they can be introduced as a significance of study in the introduction and at the end, the contributions should be mentioned alone.
11- Technically I like this mathematical solution in decision making. However, it will be so complicated for some scholars!




Reviewer #2:

The paper must be completely restructured.
Indeed, in its current form, the author presents:
- A set of definitions, remarks, examples, but without given textual explanations before giving the mathematical formulation.
- There are no apparent links between the different definitions, sections, etc. etc.
It should be important to:
- Explain with few words or in few lines, what is the contribution of the each definition.
- Propose the definitions with explanations, positioning, and links with what follow.
- Highlight the most important definitions to highlight the contribution of the author proportion.
On page 11, page where the author presents the proposal, we find a set of definitions, remarks and examples.
At page 11: It would be interesting that the author present the examples discussed by (Feng et al. 2010a) (Jiang et al. 2010a), and position its results regarding the obtained results by these authors. The goal is to have some elements of comparison.
Page 20: At the end of section 3 (proposed approach) there is no balance and the relationship between sections 3 and 4 (the author deal with 'Weighted interval-valued intuitionistic fuzzy soft sets based decision making', again without link, explanations .).
We must wait the page 25 for having explanations: the author explains the benefits of its proposition, but as he does not position this proposition regarding other examples (examples discussed in (Feng et al. 2010a) (Jiang et al. 2010a)) ? The interest is not highlighted.
At the end of page 25, the explanations are presented without giving links with the different definitions, remarks, examples (presented at the beginning of the paper) ? the benefit of the proposed approach is less visible.
It is also the case for 'Weighted interval-valued intuitionistic fuzzy soft sets based decision making' section. Moreover, the author does not position its proposition, without links .
A discussion on the types of problems that can be used with the proposed approach is important.
What about the following works: (Wang et al., 2009), (Zhang, 2011) regarding the proposed paper:
Zhoujing Wang, Kevin W. Li, Weize Wang, 2009, An approach to multiattribute decision making with interval-valued intuitionistic fuzzy assessments and incomplete weights. Information Sciences 179, 3026-3040.
Zhiming Zhang, 2011, A rough set approach to intuitionistic fuzzy soft set based decision making. Applied Mathematical Modelling.
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zhzimi_2007: 金币+2 2012-04-14 14:12:38
zhzimi_2007: 金币+1 2012-04-14 14:14:21
文章确实有很大的问题。。。第一个审稿人给的意见都很具体有效,至少可以看出你文章结构组织很有问题,单前沿你就写得很不好,空泛,罗列一些前人研究,把别人看晕了,一定要突出主次,突出文章的要点。
独上高楼。。。
12楼2012-04-11 10:16:03
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zhzimi_2007: 金币+2 2012-04-14 14:12:33
这个杂志,你认真改几次就可以了,不过一定要认真。而且你要有耐心,这个杂志(有时)比较慢。
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这可能是直接在编辑的手里就聚掉了
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zhzimi_2007

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13楼: Originally posted by visitor958 at 2012-04-11 17:02:00:
这个杂志,你认真改几次就可以了,不过一定要认真。而且你要有耐心,这个杂志(有时)比较慢。

楼主,非常感谢您的回复。您投过该杂志吗?如果投过的话,经历是否和我的一样,这个杂志,是不是没有大修这个状态,一直让人修改重投啊?
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zhzimi_2007

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13楼: Originally posted by visitor958 at 2012-04-11 17:02:00:
这个杂志,你认真改几次就可以了,不过一定要认真。而且你要有耐心,这个杂志(有时)比较慢。

楼主,非常感谢您的回复。您投过该杂志吗?如果投过的话,经历是否和我的一样,这个杂志,是不是没有大修这个状态,一直让人修改重投啊?
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zhzimi_2007: 金币+2 2012-04-14 14:12:24
zhzimi_2007: 金币+1 2012-04-14 14:14:01
只要两次意见不一样,就说明的确走的是revise and resubmit的过程。所以个人建议楼主如果觉得这次回来的修改意见还是在可以修改的范围内的话,还是认真的修改,下次就很有可能是major revision了。毕竟同样的审稿人看了两轮了,应该是有希望的。不过前提一定要是认真的修改和回复。

祝楼主好运!
坚持就是胜利!
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打豆豆66

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楼主,我想请教一下,你这篇文章最后的结果如何呢?因为我最近也打算投这个杂志。
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