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[求助] 请高手看这句话有问题么?

On this basis, the three parts of the new scheme, that is, ownership transfer protocol, secret update protocol and authorization recovery protocol, are presented.
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etin: 金币+2, 谢谢应助 2012-04-07 16:49:28
zhangxuan10: 金币+1 2012-04-07 20:33:20
感觉没有问题 不过中间的插入语 That is 怎么看着那么别扭哈!
换成 of which 变成定语从句,我觉得好一点哦!
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2楼: Originally posted by lxg133298 at 2012-04-07 16:06:48:
感觉没有问题 不过中间的插入语 That is 怎么看着那么别扭哈!
换成 of which 变成定语从句,我觉得好一点哦!

多谢,想表达一个插入语。感觉也是that is有点不好。
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zhangxuan10: 金币+2 2012-04-07 20:31:16
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On this basis, three parts of the new scheme, i.e., ownership transfer protocol, secret update protocol and authorization recovery protocol, are presented.

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On this basis, three parts of the new scheme are presented, which are ownership transfer protocol, secret update protocol and authorization recovery protocol, respectively.
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4楼: Originally posted by 小丁子 at 2012-04-07 19:08:31:
On this basis, three parts of the new scheme, i.e., ownership transfer protocol, secret update protocol and authorization recovery protocol, are presented.

or...
On this basis, three parts of t ...

非常感谢,感觉第二个好多了。
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5楼: Originally posted by zhangxuan10 at 2012-04-07 20:30:52:
非常感谢,感觉第二个好多了。

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zhangxuan10: 金币+1 2012-04-11 13:57:49
On this basis, the three parts of the new scheme —— ownership transfer protocol, secret update protocol and authorization recovery protocol, are presented.
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