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(1) Add a line for the scale bar.
(2) The sum of all your percentages is larger than 100%, which is not so reasonable.
(3) Try to give more details on the C-determination, and add some discussions on this issue.

Good luck!
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2Â¥: Originally posted by sally208 at 2012-03-20 02:14:19:
(1) Add a line for the scale bar.
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