24小时热门版块排行榜    

查看: 4049  |  回复: 12
当前只显示满足指定条件的回帖,点击这里查看本话题的所有回帖

aqzxzx

新虫 (初入文坛)

[交流] [求助]如何处理这样的审稿意见:The study is descriptive in nature 已有8人参与

2月底投了一篇文章到JBC,审稿很快,半个月就给出审稿结果了,可是令人很纠结,编辑并没有拒掉,而是希望改后重投(declined and resubmitted)。我仔细看了两个审稿人的意见,第二个审稿人的意见比较具体,而且大多是写作方面的,还比较能够针对性地修改;但第一个审稿人就只有一句话The study while interesting is descriptive in nature.让人很是抓狂。由于编辑已告知再投时需要在cover letter中详细说明针对审稿人提出的意见的修改情况,现在不知道该如何对这样的审稿意见做出回复,恳请高人给出意见。

下面附上审稿信原文:

Your manuscript has been reviewed by the Editorial Board.  
Unfortunately, the decision was made to decline the manuscript in its current
form. One reviewer indicates that the study is too descriptive and the other
finds numerous items that need attention. If you can address the issues raised,
I would be willing to consider a revised paper. Note that no guarantee of
acceptance of the revised manuscript is implied.

Reviewer 1
COMMENTS FOR THE AUTHOR:
The study while interesting is descriptive in nature.  

Reviewer 2
COMMENTS FOR THE AUTHOR:
Manuscript No: JBC/2012/356428

Comments to the authors:
The manuscript reports that YCP selectively promotes the
activation of B cells through Toll-like receptor 2 and Toll-like receptor 4. The
authors presented experimental evidence to show that YCP binds to TLR2 and TLR4
of B cell, activates a serial events of signaling pathways including p38, ERK,
JNK, and NF-κB , which eventually leads to the activation of B cell as indicated
by proliferation and IgM production. The experiments are designed reasonable and
well down, the findings are significant.

The manuscript needs revision:
1. It seems to me that the “EXPERIMENTAL PROCEDURES” part is too wordy.
2. I recommend authors to re-write the ELISA-paragraph.
3. In the figure 2-A, each panel should also includes the same field panel with
normal light observation to show all the cells in the field.
4. Let the editor to decide if the figure 6 is necessary, or in other words, if
there is enough information to construct the signaling pathway?  
5. English language should be checked carefully for accurate and unambiguous
expressions.
回复此楼

» 收录本帖的淘帖专辑推荐

SCI写作、投稿、经验

» 猜你喜欢

» 本主题相关价值贴推荐,对您同样有帮助:

已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

wxy2012

银虫 (小有名气)


小木虫(金币+0.5): 给个红包,谢谢回帖
赞同2楼的说法,可能是说你的理论分析不够,叙述性言语较多。
4楼2012-03-14 16:13:47
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
查看全部 13 个回答

Luckyman2012

木虫 (知名作家)

优秀版主


小木虫(金币+0.5): 给个红包,谢谢回帖
根据综合意见中的One reviewer indicates that the study is too descriptive 这句话,我理解审稿人是说你的论文叙述性太强,也许意思是分析不够细致到位吧。

修改后可以回复说相应的文章内容做了修改,使得整篇论文分析更全面、结论更明确。

我感觉这样,没有别的好办法。再咨询下别人吧。
走别人的路,让自己去说吧……
2楼2012-03-14 15:43:44
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

aqzxzx

新虫 (初入文坛)

引用回帖:
2楼: Originally posted by Luckyman2012 at 2012-03-14 15:43:44:
根据综合意见中的One reviewer indicates that the study is too descriptive 这句话,我理解审稿人是说你的论文叙述性太强,也许意思是分析不够细致到位吧。

修改后可以回复说相应的文章内容做了修改,使得整 ...

谢谢Luckyman2012的回复,继续坐等建议……
3楼2012-03-14 16:00:21
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖

山东老杜

木虫 (正式写手)


小木虫(金币+0.5): 给个红包,谢谢回帖
第一个审稿人有点不负责任啊
5楼2012-03-14 16:29:46
已阅   回复此楼   关注TA 给TA发消息 送TA红花 TA的回帖
普通表情 高级回复 (可上传附件)
最具人气热帖推荐 [查看全部] 作者 回/看 最后发表
[考研] 一志愿华中科技大学,080502,354分求调剂 +4 守候夕阳CF 2026-03-18 4/200 2026-03-18 22:16 by li123456789.
[考研] 一志愿吉林大学材料学硕321求调剂 +4 Ymlll 2026-03-18 6/300 2026-03-18 22:15 by li123456789.
[考研] 一志愿武理材料305分求调剂 +5 想上岸的鲤鱼 2026-03-18 6/300 2026-03-18 17:53 by 无际的草原
[考研] 一志愿天大材料与化工(085600)总分338 +3 蔡大美女 2026-03-13 3/150 2026-03-18 15:53 by jhhcooi
[考研] 085601专硕,总分342求调剂,地区不限 +5 share_joy 2026-03-16 5/250 2026-03-18 14:48 by haxia
[考研] 311求调剂 +11 冬十三 2026-03-15 12/600 2026-03-18 14:36 by 星空星月
[考研] 298-一志愿中国农业大学-求调剂 +7 手机用户 2026-03-17 7/350 2026-03-18 14:34 by vgtyfty
[考研] 303求调剂 +4 睿08 2026-03-17 6/300 2026-03-18 11:01 by Iveryant
[考研] 268求调剂 +7 好运连绵不绝 2026-03-12 8/400 2026-03-17 20:28 by xilongliang
[考研] 梁成伟老师课题组欢迎你的加入 +8 一鸭鸭哟 2026-03-14 10/500 2026-03-17 15:07 by 一鸭鸭哟
[考研] 机械专硕325,寻找调剂院校 +3 y9999 2026-03-15 5/250 2026-03-16 19:58 by y9999
[考研] 304求调剂 +3 曼殊2266 2026-03-14 3/150 2026-03-16 16:39 by houyaoxu
[考研] 0703一志愿211 285分求调剂 +5 ly3471z 2026-03-13 5/250 2026-03-16 16:16 by 哦哦123
[考博] 东华理工大学化材专业26届硕士博士申请 +6 zlingli 2026-03-13 6/300 2026-03-15 20:00 by ryzcf
[考研] 材料与化工 323 英一+数二+物化,一志愿:哈工大 本人本科双一流 +4 自由的_飞翔 2026-03-13 5/250 2026-03-14 19:39 by hmn_wj
[考研] 297一志愿上交085600求调剂 +5 指尖八千里 2026-03-14 5/250 2026-03-14 17:26 by a不易
[考研] 考研调剂 +4 芬达46 2026-03-12 4/200 2026-03-13 16:04 by ruiyingmiao
[考研] 一志愿211化学学硕310分求调剂 +8 努力奋斗112 2026-03-12 9/450 2026-03-13 15:41 by JourneyLucky
[考研] 土木第一志愿276求调剂,科研和技能十分丰富,求新兴方向的导师收留 +3 土木小天才 2026-03-12 3/150 2026-03-13 15:01 by JourneyLucky
[论文投稿] 投稿问题 5+4 星光灿烂xt 2026-03-12 6/300 2026-03-13 14:17 by god_tian
信息提示
请填处理意见