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chendy6822

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[求助] 请帮助精炼润色一句英语。

感觉下面这句话写的有的冗繁,请帮助精炼润色一下。
Previous studies have shown that the prediction of moisture loss fails to follow experimental drying data when temperature gradient is present, and that it also should avoid another phenomenon that the sample temperature does not reach the drying temperature until more than half of the water in sample is removed.
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sltmac(金币+1): 2012-02-29 08:48:42
sltmac(金币+6, 翻译EPI+1): 2012-03-06 10:38:40
Previous studies have shown that the prediction of moisture loss fails to follow experimental drying data when temperature gradient is present, and   the sample temperature does not reach the drying temperature until more than half of the water in sample is removed,which should be avoided。.
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Mally89: 这个您可以另外开贴提出问题!~欢迎常来哦!~ 2012-03-05 16:37:13
问一下:句中的present怎么翻译?

ps:这个句子真的很好!
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