| 查看: 688 | 回复: 4 | ||
| 本帖产生 1 个 翻译EPI ，点击这里进行查看 | ||
[求助]
请问这句语法有错吗，如果有错怎么改啊
|
||
| The poor chemical affinity between calcite and the silica molecules formed after hydrolysis and condensation of alkoxysilanes and the tendency to crack during shrinkage and drying due to the gel brittleness have been responsible for several studies with the objective of modifying and improving alkoxysilane performance |
回复此楼» 猜你喜欢
0703化学调剂 348分
已经有7人回复
-
初试301，代码085701环境工程，本硕一致，四六级已过，有二区一作，共发表5篇论文
已经有7人回复
-
一志愿211，0703化学305分求调剂
已经有8人回复
-
085600材料与化工301分求调剂院校
已经有17人回复
-
266分，一志愿电气工程，本科材料，求材料专业调剂
已经有10人回复
-
材料考研求调剂总分280
已经有10人回复
-
312求调剂
已经有14人回复
-
327考研调剂推荐
已经有4人回复
-
材料科学与工程320求调剂，080500
已经有6人回复
-
308求调剂
已经有6人回复
weichin
铁杆木虫 (职业作家)
- 翻译EPI: 183
- 应助: 18 (小学生)
- 金币: 9734.7
- 红花: 17
- 帖子: 4116
- 在线: 345.2小时
- 虫号: 1490943
- 注册: 2011-11-14
- 专业: 结构陶瓷
2楼2012-02-06 17:17:24
3楼2012-02-06 17:27:19
weichin
铁杆木虫 (职业作家)
- 翻译EPI: 183
- 应助: 18 (小学生)
- 金币: 9734.7
- 红花: 17
- 帖子: 4116
- 在线: 345.2小时
- 虫号: 1490943
- 注册: 2011-11-14
- 专业: 结构陶瓷
【答案】应助回帖
★
爱与雨下(金币+1): 2012-02-07 08:44:48
xufeigao(金币+10): 2012-02-07 19:11:01
爱与雨下(金币+1): 2012-02-07 08:44:48
xufeigao(金币+10): 2012-02-07 19:11:01
|
供参考： Poor chemical affinity between calcite and the silica molecules was formed after the hydrolysis and condensation of alkoxysilanes, and the the gel tends to crack during the process of shrinkage and drying. It is the objective of many studies to modify and improve the performance of alkoxysilane. |
4楼2012-02-07 08:22:57
小刘渊
金虫 (正式写手)
- 翻译EPI: 9
- 应助: 36 (小学生)
- 金币: 1223.1
- 散金: 145
- 红花: 1
- 帖子: 489
- 在线: 122.8小时
- 虫号: 1525769
- 注册: 2011-12-06
- 专业: 聚合物共混与复合材料
【答案】应助回帖
xufeigao(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1): 2012-02-07 19:10:55
|
楼主请注意你这两个and，因为你连接的是两个分句了，所以and前面要加一个逗号。 整体上结构比较混乱，找不见主语，建议你改成多个句子 建议改成这样，仅供参考： After alkoxysilanes’ hydrolysis reaction and condensation reaction, the chemical affinity between calcite and silica molecules is not strong enough(这个地方也可以用is poor). Moreover, during the drying and gel shrinkage process, the gel tends to crack. Considering above flaws(这句是我自己加的，为了连贯，呵呵), many researches are conducted to improve the properties of alkoxysilane. |
5楼2012-02-07 18:49:32
