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[求助] 大家给看看这个编辑部的意见，指导一下我这个新手

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This is a useful article outlining 2D coordination polymers with an uncommon binodal topology, photoluminescent properties, and weak catalytic behavior.  The article is acceptable for ZAAC but some of the English really needs to be repaired.  Additionally some thermogravimetric analysis to probe compound stability would be useful.
for instance in line 1 Owning should be Owing
in line 41, 'impregnant' makes absolutely no sense, please revise
PH should be written pH
change 'donated electrons ability' to 'electron donating ability'
line 51 'dose' should be 'does'
line 52 'mental ion' should be 'metal ion'
avoid flowery terminology like 'charming'. perhaps 'interesting' would be a better word choice.
in column 2 line 45 the term 'monoligand' is very confusing. please describe things better.
I will not provide any more edits but it is very clear that the authors need to improve the English by consulting a native speaker or hiring a paid proofreading service.

第一次投稿，看这个审稿意见很是头大，我看他说的有不让我缩写作者的first name，还有传照片什么的，这些都是编辑的套话吗？还是针对我个人，如果不是套话那我还要针对编辑说的这些问题去回信吗？而且编辑说的这些我都不是很清楚。看审稿人的意见倒是挺清楚的，不过就是不像我们实验室的师兄师姐们的意见是分一二三条的，那我回答问题的时候就不能按照问题1，问题2的形式回答了吧。好纠结啊，第一次投稿，急需帮助啊！！！

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visiualize(金币+10): ★★★很有帮助我就是这么改的，已经又投过去了…… 2012-01-29 20:33:27

“recommended publication, but also suggest some minor revisions ” - 说是小修发表，不过有很大的语言问题，需要认真修改（不要只改点出来的问题）：
"I will not provide any more edits but it is very clear that the authors need to improve the English by consulting a native speaker or hiring a paid proofreading service."