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wolfmanhd(金币+10, 翻译EPI+1): ★★★★★最佳答案 2012-01-13 11:43:52
p.1 line 17: “… called this doped TiO2 as the second generation…”
修改后：“… called this doped TiO2 the second generation…”
p.1 line 40: “So, we wonder how to prepare a TIO2 with …”
修改后：“So, we wonder how to prepare TIO2 with …”3
p.1 line 84: “… but why it has no photocatalytic activity? At one time, we thought that if this phenomenon was possibly resulted from the strong photo-luminescence (PL) of novel TiO2 (A) under visible light. However, this doubt was denied after the transient IR absorption spectra of both P25-TiO2 and novel TiO2 (A) were determined.”
修改后：“… but why doesn’t it have photocatalytic activity? At one time, we thought whether this phenomenon was possibly resulted from the strong photo-luminescence (PL) of novel TiO2 (A) under visible light. However, this thought was denied after the transient IR absorption spectra of both P25-TiO2 and novel TiO2 (A) were determined.”【注：doubt本义指不相信其后面引导的命题，e.g.：I doubt that you are a good guy.就是说我不认为你是好人。suspect恰恰相反。所以，用suspect代替thought也成。】
p.2 line 30:”… can’t, what’s the reason?”
修改后：”… can’t ***. What’s the reason?”【can’t后内容不全，一个简单句不能出现2个谓语结构。故拆成两个句子，请根据内容补充***部分】
p.2 line 43:”… that there must have electrons traps on TiO2 surface,…”
修改后：”… that there must be electrons traps on TiO2 surface,…” |
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