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这是小学一年级学生的演讲材料，时间2分钟。帮我看看还有什么疏忽没有，谢谢大家！ What can I Do for the Olympics Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympics in 2001. It proves that China is getting more and more stronger and is playing a more important role in the whole sports world. As a pupil, I can contribute to the Olympics in the following ways. On one hand, the Olympic Games is getting increasingly nearer to us, but language gap is still a big problem. So I should learn English with great enthusiasm and I hope I can participate in the Olympic Games as a volunteer. On the other hand, Beijing is a famous city in the world .More foreigner will come to china during the Olympics .So we should protect environment around ourselves and give the foreigner a good impression. For example, as far as I am concerned, I should not spit and litter. At the same time, I am obliged to giving some advices to my friends. What we act is another language of us. This is what I can do for the Olympics. If everyone participates in the preparation of Olympics, I believe that the Beijing Olympics will be the most successful one in the history. [ Last edited by 小北1999 on 2007-1-29 at 09:57 ] |
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