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给小学一年级学生攒的一段简单英语,她要参加一个什么演讲比赛,请大家帮我修改一下,谢谢啦! 忘了告诉大家了，是一个两分钟的演讲。 What I can Do for the Olympics Beijing won the bid for the 2008 Olympics in 2001. It proves that china is getting stronger and stronger and is playing a more important part in the world sports. As a pupil, I can contribute to the Olympics in the following ways. On one hand the Olympic Games is getting increasingly nearer to us .And the language gap is still a big problem yet .but I hope I can participate in the Olympic Games as a volunteer . So I should learn English with great effort. on the other hand, More foreign friends will come to china before and during the Olympics. I hope Peking impresses them with its environment. At least I should protect environment around myself. For example, don't spit and don't litter. And I feel obliged to give some warnings to my friends. How we act is another language of us. This is what I can do for the Olympics. If everyone participate in the preparation of Olympics ,I believe that the Beijing Olympics will be the most successful one in the human history. 请版主代奖励金币： changchengd 7枚 [ Last edited by 小北1999 on 2007-1-28 at 14:53 ] |
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1.第一句应该是：What can I Do for the Olympics 2.It proves that china is getting stronger and stronger and is playing a more important part in the world sports. and 后面的is多余；a 多余 3.I hope Peking impresses them with its environment.换成短语give sb impression in 较好 4.演讲比赛，最好还有个开场白 |
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everyone participate in the preparation of Olympics ,I believe that the Beijing Olympics will be the most successful one in the human history. 这一句，everyone是单数的 http://en.beijing2008.cn/ 这个链接网址有关于北京2008的东西。看看，可以表达的更地道，找到新的灵感…… [ Last edited by dcb005 on 2007-1-28 at 09:36 ] |
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