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[求助] 编辑来信没太看懂，请帮助大概看一下，谢谢

前天投的一篇论文，编辑来信大概说是技术能耗很高，没实用价值，让我解释一下，但是里面有几句话实在看不懂，请大家帮我看看总体是什么意思
第一段和最后一段都懂，就是第三段的一小段，一句话没看懂什么意思，这么突然来一句都不知道在说什么

Thank you for submitting your manuscript for publication in XXXX（期刊名）. I understand from my preliminary reading that you have devised and tested novel ways of increasing the effectiveness of this means of ameliorating exhaust gas. However, before I can send the manuscript out for review I must ask you to revise it to address a point that I am certain will concern the reviewers.

By my calculation your protocol involves a power density of ~2700 J/L (= 36 W/0.8 L/min), which is two orders of magnitude higher than the figure that I am used to seeing for the technologies that you call laboratory curiosities. Therefore I would ask you to please check my calculation and, if I am correct, then please explain how your protocol could be deployed in a practical manner. I note that I have neglected the energy input for creating the hydrogen peroxide.

You will understand that we are striving to archive results that can be that bear on the underlying molecular phenomena and that also have some utility.

I am formally rejecting this manuscript to give you the opportunity to make those changes. I hope you will continue to consider that XXXXX can provide your work with an attentive audience. Therefore, when further experimentation, analysis, and revisions allow you to address those concerns in full we would be happy to consider a revised manuscript as a new submission. Please refer to the Manuscript ID above and include a detailed list of the changes you make when you submit the new manuscript so we can process it rapidly.

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爱与雨下(金币+1): 2011-11-13 08:32:18
半熟的小苹果(金币+5): 2011-11-15 09:30:19

You will understand that we are striving to archive results that can be that bear on the underlying molecular phenomena and that also have some utility.

就是指明一下研究的思路，通俗的说
就是：你要明白我们的努力目标是在分子处理机制的效果中带来一定的实用性
underlying molecular phenomena 在环境处理废气不知道怎么表达\(^o^)/~
自己琢磨一下就行了