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健忘

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lppv(金币+2): good job, thank you. 2011-10-20 19:50:34
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10楼: Originally posted by baigang at 2011-10-20 13:35:11:
help change it ,please

1, delete "in" in the phrase"in last night"
2, "have" should not appear in "there be sentence pattern"
3, "was threw down" is  passive voice, it is reasonable to use the following one to replace the sentence : a footballer was smashed down by something from the stand
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11楼2011-10-20 14:07:10
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baigang

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11楼: Originally posted by 健忘 at 2011-10-20 14:07:10:
1, delete "in" in the phrase"in last night"
2, "have" should not appear in "there be sentence pattern"
3, "was threw down" is  passive voice, i ...

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12楼2011-10-20 14:09:35
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I don't like football~~~
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demonyuu

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11 VS 9, 2:0.
在每一个没有你在的日子,内心不能安宁。这么久了,怎么忍得?
15楼2011-10-20 19:33:56
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baigang

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15楼: Originally posted by demonyuu at 2011-10-20 19:33:56:
11 VS 9, 2:0.

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baigang

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13楼: Originally posted by ljason at 2011-10-20 18:37:33:

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14楼: Originally posted by aman1987 at 2011-10-20 18:37:59:
I don't like football~~~

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Watching chinese football game is harm to our healthy.
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