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lppv(金币+2): good job, thank you. 2011-10-20 19:50:34
lppv(金币+2): good job, thank you. 2011-10-20 19:50:34
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1, delete "in" in the phrase"in last night" 2, "have" should not appear in "there be sentence pattern" 3, "was threw down" is passive voice, it is reasonable to use the following one to replace the sentence : a footballer was smashed down by something from the stand |

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