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baigang

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[交流] football game

i watched a football game last night . taida VS shenhua . there was a large audience in the locale and  a ridiculous thing during the game . a footballer  was smashed down by something from the stand  .
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[ Last edited by baigang on 2011-10-20 at 14:14 ]
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不要回忆,不要后悔,就让时间冲淡一切吧。我是神经病,请远离我。
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lppv(金币+2): good job, thank you. 2011-10-20 19:50:34
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10楼: Originally posted by baigang at 2011-10-20 13:35:11:
help change it ,please

1, delete "in" in the phrase"in last night"
2, "have" should not appear in "there be sentence pattern"
3, "was threw down" is  passive voice, it is reasonable to use the following one to replace the sentence : a footballer was smashed down by something from the stand
好好学习 天天向上
11楼2011-10-20 14:07:10
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li123cl

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Those things don't sounds strange anymore. Just as a popular saying goes "You know it".
4楼2011-10-20 09:04:35
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football is the pain in Chinese people's heart for ever, I have lost
heart for this game.
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6楼2011-10-20 10:31:34
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6楼: Originally posted by mooncakexzj at 2011-10-20 10:31:34:
football is the pain in Chinese people's heart for ever, I have lost
heart for this game.

me too
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