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[求助] 看一下语法是否有问题。

机械制造领域的,投会议文章,审稿意见说语法有问题,于是自己将摘要的语态改为被动,请帮忙看看是否还有问题?
The electrolytic in-process dressing (ELID) technology was combined with ultrasonic honing technology and ELID-ultrasonic honing system was proposed, and the electrolysis parameters, ultrasound parameters, honing parameters reasonable was matched for ELID- ultrasonic honing system and the honing processing experiment was carried out. Studies have shown that: Parameters in ELID-ultrasonic honing system are independent without disturbing each other, compared to traditional honing and ultrasonic honing, it has a significant advantage in machining accuracy, surface roughness, processing efficiency and so on. The feasibility of ELID- ultrasonic honing system is validated, which provided a new compound method of honing for ultra-precise honing machining.

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xsh1(金币+2): 不错,谢谢。 2011-08-13 16:34:12
and the electrolysis parameters, ultrasound parameters, honing parameters reasonable were matched for ELID- ultrasonic honing system and the honing processing experiment was carried out.
楼主为啥一段话要用两个时态呢?
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sltmac(金币+1): 辛苦~ 2011-08-13 13:07:15
xsh1(金币+1, 翻译EPI+1): 辛苦,谢谢。 2011-08-13 16:33:44
Studies have shown that Parameters in ELID-ultrasonic honing system are independent without disturbing each other. Compared to traditional honing and ultrasonic honing, the ELID-ultrasonic honing system has significant advantages in machining accuracy, surface roughness, processing efficiency and so on.
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xsh1(金币+2): 谢谢。 2011-08-13 16:34:28
Studies have shown that: Parameters in ELID-ultrasonic honing system are (私下认为是were,这里应该也是时态一致吧)independent without disturbing each other, compared to traditional honing and ultrasonic honing, it has a significant advantage in machining accuracy, surface roughness, processing efficiency and so on. The feasibility of ELID- ultrasonic honing system is validated, which provided a new compound method of honing for ultra-precise honing machining.
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