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Originally posted by Mally89 at 2011-07-22 10:11:02:
额。。。
木有处罚的。。。
嘿嘿。。。
我就选一套留着,其余的给你重新编辑了啊。。。

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Originally posted by 爱与雨下 at 2011-07-18 21:48:18:
套题七

1、For instance, one night he played strong and loud music till four o’clock in the morning.
2、Sometimes, we talked to each other very well in class, but after class we become strange ...

修改9楼的套题七:
1、For instance, one night he played strong and loud music till four o’clock in the morning.
2、Sometimes, we talk to each other very well in class, but after class we become strangers at once.
3、She stopped to look out of the window and found a cloud of smoke coming out of her neighbor’s house.
4、We live in a big family. We treat each other as brothers and sisters.
5、Her parents were in Shanghai, and so were his.

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7楼: Originally posted by Mally89 at 2011-07-18 20:53:55:
[box=#C0C0C0]套题六

1、I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang.
2、My favourite sport is football. I was a membe ...

1、I learn about you from my English teacher, Miss Fang.
改:此为时态问题,learn改为learned或者have learned
2、My favourite sport is football. I was a member of our school football team. 改:时态一致,用的是一般现在时,此句也应改为一般现在时。was---am
3、I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot of time arguing and there was no way of settling the matter except by selling the set. am改为was
4、Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. ofen 与whenever貌似重复了,去掉ofen
5、What things are in other homes, I wonder.宾语前置了,改为:I wonder what things are in other's homes.
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10楼: Originally posted by crystal0329 at 2011-07-18 23:30:24:
1、Bill was standing at the side of the car, talking to two men who were helping him to repair it.
2、Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also gives us a ...

4、Charles said, “As soon as I see a really tall building, I will climb it. "
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6楼: Originally posted by Mally89 at 2011-07-18 20:52:40:
[box=#C0C0C0]套题五

1、If the book you will want is out, you may ask for it to be called back for you.
2、I had always wanted ...

1、If the book you want is out, you may ask for it to be called back for you.
2、I always wanted to return to the village after moving away and it is really great to see most of my old friends again.
3、They offered me coffee and other drinks. We had a good time talking and laughing together.
4、So then, a concert costs so much. I may just listen to music.
5、If I listen to my own records, there is no need to spend money.
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