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NK_xiaoya

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[求助] 请求帮忙修改一下我的套磁信,谢谢了

相中一位老师,以下是我写给一个老师的套磁信,第一次写,不知道该写成什么样子,侧重点是什么,还希望有经验的人指导一下,我先谢谢了
Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I have learned about your research from website, and I am highly interested in your research on medical imaging and image analysis on life science applications. I want to pursue my Ph.D. in your program.

With a GPA of 3.29/4, majoring in automation, I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is the Innovative Project I joined with other 4 students as sophomores, and another is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot, and I am quite sincere to look for a new starting point in my research and career based on this.

Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group. But I am quite happy to learn some new knowledge and skills, and I believe I can master new programs/projects quite well.

Could you reconsider me as a PHD position in your lab? And if you have openings for that, I would be honored.

I attached my C.V and scanned transcript in this letter.
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Originally posted by lasasky at 2011-07-20 10:47:24:
mark too!!!学习一下

这个现在看着真的不怎么样
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你机械工程专业的?我也正在申请。。。
2楼2011-07-06 00:40:38
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NK_xiaoya(金币+5): 2011-07-06 10:50:14
heding(金币+3): thx for commu. 欢迎常来DIY大家庭撒!~ 2011-07-06 11:22:43
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Originally posted by NK_xiaoya at 2011-07-05 22:55:35:
相中一位老师,以下是我写给一个老师的套磁信,第一次写,不知道该写成什么样子,侧重点是什么,还希望有经验的人指导一下,我先谢谢了
Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I hav ...

Dear Dr. XX:

My name is XXX, a master student from China.

I have studied your research area of  medical imaging and image analysis on life science applicationsfrom website, which attracted my big interest . I would like to pursue my Ph.D. degree in your group.

I received my bachelor degree at XXUniversity (topX in China) in 2009, with a GPA of 3.29/4  是不是前几名是的话写个top几, majoring in automation. Two programs I had taken part in were in relation to medicine. One is an innovative Project worked with other 4 students as sophomores, and the other is my thesis research (you can find more details in my CV). (The experience makes me learn the value of some research and its applicability in some necessary fields attracts me a lot) 这段写点你学会了的东西,写点实在的,比如会用了什么分析方法. and I am quite sincere to look forward a new starting point in my research and career based on this.

Ranking top 1/38 as a master in xx 这段看的很别扭, my research interest focuses on XXprocessing 如果有研究成果了突出一下,比如又没有什么paper了,这个地方详细写下. (more details in my CV), and I'll finish my graduate in Jan. 2012. I know that my background in XX may not be quite suitable for your group 最好不要写这样的话,建议换成直接写能为你在未来的科研中提供怎样的帮助,比如你有很好的研究基础,基本的仪器,手段你都会.  I desire to accept much knowledge and skills, and I believe I could hold new programs/projects quite well.

Could you reconsider me as a PHD candidate in your lab? Appreciate for your attention

My C.V and scanned transcript were attached in this letter.
3楼2011-07-06 01:11:02
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heding(金币+2): thx for commu. 欢迎常来DIY大家庭撒!~ 2011-07-06 11:22:55
具体就不改了,多写写自己为什么感兴趣,在科研中遇到过什么问题,怎么解决的,以后的打算是什么!不要写那个排名了,没意思,有点显得你只会考试似的!
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4楼2011-07-06 01:37:53
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