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[交流] scarecrow

Always standing on the farmland day and night, regardless of rain and shine, I am a scarecrow. Had noticed a young lady scarecrow was not far away from me for several days, I was eager to stay with her. So I tried to move close to her all the times, but I could do nothing except wiggling my body with the wind. That was a common night as other thousand ones I had spent here, but things were different, I could move, I could dance, I could even say “Hi” to this familiar world! I couldn’t conceal my excitement and just kept dancing to get close to her. I couldn’t dare to see her when I touched her hand, I didn’t know what was called heartbeat until that moment. Nothing could describe how excited I was, and I just couldn’t stop dancing. Had accompanied me for a couple of days, these flowers were still colorful, so I wanted to wear them on my goddess’s head. However, it became to rain, the strong thunder and flashing didn’t mean to stop, and I nearly couldn’t move my body to her for the vigorous wind. Nothing can stop the scarecrow who has faith. The last thing I wanted to do was sending my love to her …
Whether it is a dream, I have shared a moment with her in the end.

http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjgxODkyNjcy.html

PS: Watch this vedio，maybe you will like it.

[ Last edited by David0921 on 2011-7-6 at 14:43 ]

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Originally posted by phu_grassman at 2011-07-06 12:15:29:
Scarecrow? I just can't help reading your article. Appeared in your dream? Haha, but not me. However I wish I could stay in someone's dream. I will read it for detail and give my advice when I get ...

I'm back and read your article again and also watched the vedio. You're really talented to express his dance in words. Nice job. I like the performance very much, and your writing.
There are few mistakes in it, I suppose you must have a good master of English. The following is my corrections. However, we can discuss.
Always standing on the farmland day and night, regardless of rain and shine（sun）, I am a scarecrow. Had noticed a young lady scarecrow was not far away from me for several days, I was eager to stay with her. So I tried to move close to her all the times(all the time, means always, not times here), but I could do nothing except wiggling(but wiggle, can do nothing but… …) my body with the wind. That was a common night as other thousand ones I had spent here, but things were different, I could move, I could dance, I could even say “Hi” to this familiar world! I couldn’t conceal my excitement and just kept dancing to get close to her. I couldn’t dare(dare not) to see her when I touched her hand, I didn’t know what was called heartbeat until that moment. Nothing could describe how excited I was, and I just couldn’t stop dancing. Had accompanied me for a couple of days, these flowers were still colorful, so I wanted to wear them on my goddess’s head. However, it became(began) to rain, the strong thunder and flashing didn’t mean to stop, and I nearly couldn’t move my body to her for the vigorous wind. Nothing can stop the scarecrow who has faith. The last thing I wanted to do was sending my love to her …
Whether it is a dream, I have shared a moment with her in the end.