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David0921

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Always standing on the farmland day and night, regardless of rain and shine, I am a scarecrow. Had noticed a young lady scarecrow was not far away from me for several days, I was eager to stay with her. So I tried to move close to her all the times, but I could do nothing except wiggling my body with the wind. That was a common night as other thousand ones I had spent here, but things were different, I could move, I could dance, I could even say “Hi” to this familiar world! I couldn’t conceal my excitement and just kept dancing to get close to her. I couldn’t dare to see her when I touched her hand, I didn’t know what was called heartbeat until that moment. Nothing could describe how excited I was, and I just couldn’t stop dancing. Had accompanied me for a couple of days, these flowers were still colorful, so I wanted to wear them on my goddess’s head. However, it became to rain, the strong thunder and flashing didn’t mean to stop, and I nearly couldn’t move my body to her for the vigorous wind. Nothing can stop the scarecrow who has faith. The last thing I wanted to do was sending my love to her …
Whether it is a dream, I have shared a moment with her in the end.



http://v.youku.com/v_show/id_XMjgxODkyNjcy.html

PS: Watch this vedio,maybe you will like it.

[ Last edited by David0921 on 2011-7-6 at 14:43 ]
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lppv

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you are always so romantic
人活着好没意思啊
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Is she your sweetheart lover in dream?
家有小子初长成!(Nothing is impossible to a willing heart!)
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引用回帖:
Originally posted by lppv at 2011-07-05 22:12:31:
you are always so romantic

I just write something to improve my english level and hope you all to correct the mistakes what I have made.
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David0921

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Originally posted by bio-research at 2011-07-05 22:22:49:
Is she your sweetheart lover in dream?

There is a link in the test, just click it and see the vedio  
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Originally posted by David0921 at 2011-07-05 22:23:00:
I just write something to improve my english level and hope you all to correct the mistakes what I have made.

hope you all to correct the mistakes what I have made

there is no the usage: hope sb. to do

you could use an object clause: hope that.....

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人活着好没意思啊
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Originally posted by lppv at 2011-07-05 22:42:24:
hope you all to correct the mistakes what I have made

there is no the usage: hope sb. to do

you could use an object clause: hope that.....

Thank you for your correction
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Originally posted by David0921 at 2011-07-05 23:01:33:
Thank you for your correction

oh, I forgot, you should also delete the word "what" or change it into "that" or "which".

good night, have a good dream. see you.
人活着好没意思啊
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